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loveangel143
11-03-2011, 09:56 PM
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Sequel to ~Splashing Rain~

*...1...*

Have you wondered what it's like to have such an awesome life? I do, because I'm living in it.. Right now. I slipped down the wooden staircase in my house by the railing. Now, normally my parents wouldn't agree to that.. But it's my world. Jade Island. It isn't easy to be normal when your Mom is a famous Actress/Model, and your Dad's an owner of a luxurious car company, but I managed. My BFF, Salacia Bright Star, waited by the door.
“Hey! We're gonna be LATE! C'mon!” she cried, quickly opening the door and slamming it onto the wall. “Oops.”
I sighed and smiled. “That's ok.” I exited and went outside.
I was going to an audition for a show. Yea, my Mom, Marissa, is pushing me to do it. But I didn't actually complain. I liked acting.
I patted my pockets for my phone.
“Shoot,” I muttered. I raced back to my house and dug for my phone. My house was as large as how a diamond members' house could go, because my dad bought me one. I searched my desk. Nothing. My long brunette curly hair was bothering my face. I didn't bother putting it aside, though. I finally found it under a pile of stacked folders, .... A+ homework, and audition scripts. I grasped it and slammed the door when I got out.
“There. Let's go..” I panted, and Salz followed me to exit The Lofts and we saw the miraculously beautiful gardens. Most of them was planted by my fellow friends and gardeners, Charlotte Melody and Kiara Fabulous Melody. I made a loud whistle with my fingers while I nodded my head and more hair came to my face. I grunted tiredly and blew a strand of my hair which came back once again. I swept my hair back and the driver pulled up and Salacia and I entered the yellow little car. I have to admit it WAS squishy, but like I said, I managed.

*...2...*

“Where to?” the driver hissed.
I glared at him unknowingly. “Um, wait a sec...” I tore through my pockets once again, finding my phone. I snatched it and tapped on notes. (Yes, the My-Links are upgraded in my story.. Every one of them.) It was--
Reyes' Modeling Agency, Club C&B
I told him that urgently.
“Alright..” The driver grunted, turning the handle on the car and making a ridiculously loud grunt in the car. Plus, smoke came out.
“Last time I ever choose a rusty taxi,” I whispered scoffingly to Salz.
Salz was staring up angrily. “And last time I ever go into a taxi with you.” she had a distinctly dark voice. She held a sarcastic smile and nudged me hard in the arm.
“Somethin' wrong?” the driver asked thoughtfully.
“No,” Salz and I said at the same time, sarcastically.
I stared at the window like a fairy tale was outside, unfolding before our eyes. Unfortunately, it wasn't a fairy tale. It was a city tale. I glared at the clubs, modeling agencies, and all that. I sang Stereo Hearts by Gym Class Heroes quietly as it played on the radio. “My heart's a stereo, It beats for you, so listen close. Hear my thoughts in every no-o-o-te, Make me your radio. And turn me up when you feel low, This melody was meant for you, Just sing along to my stereo..”
Then the taxi stopped with a hard halt, which jolted me forward. It reminded me of a train ride at a theme park when I was a little kid.
“Get out and get me my money.” The driver scowled, showing angry, yellow, big, chipped teeth. It scared me. I dropped 20 gems into his hand and stuttered, “Keepthechange.” I, and Salz, fast-walked all the way to the gray, studded, door. Me and Salz rushed inside. It was BUS-Y! Everyone was at least at a different place, or in a huddle.
Salz glared at me. I knew it was a signal of saying, “What's going on?” I shook my head vastly. I walked to one of the people. “Where's Mr. Stein?!” I cried.
“We don't know. We think he's gone missing.”

*...3...*

"Seriously! MISSING?!" Salz cried.
I shook my head in amazement. "What now?"
"You must go. We will figure this out." he snapped, pushing us to the exit.
We apparently had to go ride the same cab and go back again.
I slammed the door behind me. I ran upstairs and fell onto my bed. I grabbed my ML and called my Mom, Marissa.
"Mom?" I called, and my voice kind of echoed.
"Yes?" she called after.
"Auditions gone. Director missing." I spoke awkwardly.
"WHAT! Then go stay at your house. A KIDNAPPER might be loose!" My over-protective Mother cried.
I sighed.
"I'm pretty sure there aren't any kidnappers on Jade Island."
"If you say so," Mom stuttered. "I have to go. OH! Wait! I have something important to tell you! I found a job on Jade Island. It is a role model for acting. I'm an acting role model!"
I froze solid and gulped. In Jade Island. This can only mean one thing. Total Embarrassment.
"Nice," I congratulated sarcastically, "When are you here?"
"I'm with Valerie right now. I will see you!" she hung up.
Closing my ML, I left my house and trailed off to Jade Port immediately. It was quite difficult because of the humid summer weather. I saw my mother's blonde hair, and ran up to hear and screamed on the top of my lungs, "STOP!"
I felt stupid saying that. In front of Valerie. She looked shocked and weirded out. I felt my face go deep cherry red. "Hehe, sorry." I stuttered. Valerie stepped towards me. Her heels clicked hard on the cement. She shown a cold face that I've never seen before. She opened her mouth and out came harsh, deep words. "I shall never hear that nonsense again, are clear?"
I gulped hard. My legs were even cold from the weather- and Valerie. "Yes Miss Talasi."
"Verity!" my mother shrieked in excitement, hugging me tight. Thank god nobody's here except us, I said to myself.
I had a startled face. "Heey, Mom,"
Then an awkward silence started. I ended it by exclaiming quickly "Gottagobye!" and scurrying to Fashion Cafe.

Dedicated to Dani http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif I hope your neighborhood's alright without those wonderful trees http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

*...4...*

I stopped by the stationary store to get me a new songbook. Nobody knows, but I really like writing songs. It calms me down and escapes me from the world. I sat down on a chair. I took out a pen and opened the book up. I started chewing on the top of the pen to think. I took my pen and wrote down--
Natural

Sometimes the world will see you
On your own and there's nothing
You can do about it

I dropped my pen and forgot about putting the verses and choruses stuff. Ehh, I'll manage.

Because
I sat around alone with nothin' to but watch ya
So I thought real hard and wanna make a change about ya

I just wanna see a planet
I'll be proud of (I'll be)
So I'll dig right in everybody's hearts
Cuz they won't open it up
(Themselves, themselves)

Because
I sat around alone with nothin' to do but watch ya
So I thought real hard and wanna make a change about ya

(Because this is what I see, what I see)
I see a planet
With a soft heart
Dug up real deep (and I wanna, and I wanna)
Get down, and make it softer! It ain't right to make it old and worn!
It ain't right to make it useless and trashy!

Because
I sat around alone with nothin' to do what watch ya
So I thought real hard and wanna make a change about ya

Because we are natural (yes we are, yes we are)
This is the future I see
The beautiful skies blue
The natur-AL
The natur-AL
Life as we know it.

I felt proud. It was dedicated to the trees.
Someone nudged me by the elbow. I turned around and Tessa was there.
"Hi, Tess," I greeted softly.
"Hey. So, you gonna order here or sing?" she interrogated me.
"Sing! What!" I exclaimed.
"That's a pretty darn good song I hear. Come on, Verity, take it or leave it."
I shook my head smiling. She grabbed my hand and took me to the counter. I sat on it. I gave Tessa the piano notes.
"Sometimes the world will see you," I started, shaking. "On your own, and there's nothing you can do about it. Because, I sat around alone with nothin' to do but watch ya, so I thought real hard and wanna make a change about ya," I finished the song off. An uproar of claps surrounded me. I was blushing really hard. Tessa say beside me and cried, "That was SO cool!"
I nodded. My face was like one of those yellow happy faces, all teeth. "So you gonna order something?" joked Tessa. I chuckled. I looked at my ML watch. "Oh no," I gasped. 5:30! I was supposed to be at dance! I said bye to Tessa and off I went.
"I'm sorry I'm late Jordan." I scurried to my seat.
"Ehh, mistakes happen," Jordan replied softly. I never heard him say that. If you were late, he'd probably just give you a huge lecture about "dance beauty" and "tardiness" and all that nonsense. But this was different. "Alright what's going on..?" I questioned.
"Nothing," Jordan said creepily, "Nothing at all." he had a twisted, cold grin on his face. He was leaning over a chair. "Heard your Mom's a role model, huh Starbright?" Jordan sneered, moving his eyebrows. I twitched. I knew he had a CRUSH on my Mom ever since I arrived. It was haunting and freaky. "Let me tell you this, MY MOM IS MARRIED." I hissed. Jordan stopped examining his nails. "Nope. THAT is just your step-not-to-be-dad."
I rolled my eyes ignorantly and the fact that my stepdad was my stepdad because my real dad-- I- nevermind. I mean, my mom and him ARE- well- Ick- DATING, but whatever. There is absolutely NO POSSIBLE WAY that Jordan will be my dad. Just not possible.

*...5...*

I acted an audible voice. "Well then I guess it'll be turnin' ugly," I teased, stepping out of my chair and prancing off home. I did not like how he always thought he was the boss of me. I caught a glimpse of my old family photo. I was only six. My baby brother not even born. My mom. And, finally.... My father. The one who died when he was in the army. I glared at the photo for a long time, and kissed my father. I knew it was still a photo. I felt tears coming down my eyes, and as for that I knew I was being too sentimental. I, was alone. It all changed when Dad left. I wouldn't be here. I would be in Ruby Island, my home island. I arrived at Jade Island when I was 14. I was born in Ruby Island. It was home to the broadway and movie sets. I loved it. I wiped away the wetness of my face. I suddenly heard somebody knock. I opened the door, still wiping my eyes. I saw a familiar face. Bleach blonde with brown streaks. Silvery eyes. Pink, glossy, lips.
"Hi?" I stuttered, my voice low.
"OH MY GOSH!" she cried, jumping up and down like one of those "Mean Girls" when they saw eachother. "IT'S ME, TAYLOR!"
"Hi, Taylor," I repeated.
"FROM RUBY ISLAND! 1ST GRADE! MRS. LOVENE'S CLASS!"
Then I saw again that annoying voice. Yep, it was Taylor. Surely, she came to annoy me again.
"Oh. Yeah. Taylor. SO! What are you doing here?" I aforementioned dully.
"I'm going back to Ruby Island for vacation! Wanna come! BRING 3 FRIENDS! It's a 5 person pack." she was excitedly jumpy.
"Ok... I guess... Anyway I'll go back and get my friends. See ya." I slowly closed the door rudely while Taylor was still chirping on about stuff.
I decided to kick back and write stuff in my songbook. So, I wrote a quote--

Wish upon a star, but it'll only take you halfway


*...6...*

I tucked it away, and feel asleep silently on the coach.

The next morning I, once again, attempted and failed to make a breakfast. I was a horrible chef. I discovered that when I was working at Pierre's and Chef P threw up on a vintage Elvis Presley plate. Boy, was he mad. I didn't reverie that image. He kicked me out of the restaurant. And every time I saw him, he would give me the evil eye and a dark look. And, now I promise that my stomach will go nutters for the rest of the day, because I skipped breakfast.
Carefully, I chose a black glamour jacket, black glitter rock jeggings, Jade Mall black boots, and a shirt with a tank top sleeve, and a long sleeve with white background with black stripes (By Megan http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif) AND black glitter rock fingerless gloves http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
I walked to Salz's house to ask her if she wanted to go to Ruby Island. I stepped anxiously on a step, straightened my jacket, and knocked. I had a glimpse of Salacia while she opened the door.
"Hey Verity," she yawned, and I noticed she was still in her pajamas.
"HI! Ok. Wanna come to Ruby Island with me?" I stuttered really fast.
"Huh?" Salz asked, confuzzled (This, should really be without red squiggly lines).
"Um, my- eh, annoying old friend told me to bring 3 friends. We are going to a trip to Ruby Island, where I was born." I explained bluntly.
"Ruby Island?!" Salacia screamed, "THE Movie Island?!?!?!"
"Yeaaaaaah....." I spoke awkward. "it's not so interesting once you live there for a couple of years."
"Alright. Count me in. I'll go change and pack, and text you when I'm done? A'right?"
"Ok. And be done by TONIGHT."
She nodded urgently, slamming the door, I rolled my eyes and headed to Dan's. I knocked. It flew open, because of the wind. I saw Dani typing up a chapter for her story. AT 5:30 AM.
I shook my head playfully. "Oh, Dan."
Dani turned her chair and ran up to the door. "Dumb door." she chuckled. "So?"
"OH! Um, my- eh, annoying old friend told me to bring 3 friends. We are going to a trip to Ruby Island, where I was born." I repeated therefore what I said to Salacia.
"OH, COOL! The Movie Island! Count me in! I'll get reading- I mean, ready. I'll text you." she waved goodbye and I stepped back. I heard her close the door, and while I walked, I saw her typing again from the window. I started to feel some drops, so I urgently jogged to Fashion Cafe. I went inside, and a bunch of people were there. So I bet they had the same problem as me, since Fashion Cafe barely had customers. I felt a little bad that they were stuck here. "Oh, wow, Tessa," I started, sitting at the bar. "This is so much customers."
"Oh, psh." she snapped. "Wanna entertain again?"
"Sing?"
"Yep."
I rolled my eyes ignorantly. "I'm going to regret this."
I sat on top of the table again and cleared my throat. I decided on singing "Airplanes" by B.O.B and Hayley Williams. I sang the chorus, because the rap was too leveled for me.
"Can we pretend that the airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars, I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now-ow-ow, can we pretend that the airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars, I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now-ow-ow....."

artsaboveall
11-03-2011, 09:58 PM
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif Thank you so much for adding me, BFF!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Please write more!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

loveangel143
11-03-2011, 10:01 PM
XD Kay, but gotta go to sleep NOW! yay tomorr: Friday so expect 2 WHOLE COMPLETED CHAPTERS (not including 1) AND MORE,PROBABLY..!

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 03:18 PM
I need to make my chapters shorter. It gives more suspense hehe http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/shady.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/typing.gif

bubblemint9
11-04-2011, 05:08 PM
yeah. and it helps you get through a chapter if you have writer's cement.

fabiona12
11-04-2011, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by loveangel143:
I need to make my chapters shorter. It gives more suspense hehe http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/shady.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/typing.gif

NOOOOOOO!!!! usually i like suspence, but not if it lasts too long http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/59.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/blink.gif

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 08:42 PM
hehe XD

bubblemint9
11-04-2011, 08:45 PM
-Gaps and gasps at Very's banner- Who made that banner?!? OH MY DIRT, THIS BANNER IS AWESOME STRAWBERRY AWESOMENESS CAKE SAUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 08:47 PM
Secrethttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif

artsaboveall
11-04-2011, 08:48 PM
I'LL GIVE YOU A HINT! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

Pssst....her name is there somewhere http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/shady.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_cool.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 08:49 PM
Uh huh.

FIND IT!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/winky.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_razz.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

bubblemint9
11-04-2011, 08:51 PM
SALZ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
AMZING QUOTE OF THE DAY!!! : "This pleasior is pleasant, I think I might faint."

artsaboveall
11-04-2011, 08:52 PM
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loveangel143
11-04-2011, 08:53 PM
DING DING DING!

WE HAVE A WINNER!!!!! (Del) http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gif

bubblemint9
11-04-2011, 08:54 PM
Wow. I (litteraly. hold on to a chair here, YOU might faint,) have never won any thing before ...

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 09:03 PM
Gasp. I betcha you have. :P

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 09:04 PM
K let's not get off topic, Kay? This thread is supposed to present the amazing story, Going Global XD

fabiona12
11-04-2011, 10:55 PM
i have a q, is this about caring for the environment. cuz humans are tearing earth down like monsters right now http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/disagree.gif

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 10:57 PM
I know. I'm a total nature freak http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif But no...

fabiona12
11-04-2011, 10:59 PM
oh, well its still going to be AWESOME!

loveangel143
11-05-2011, 12:29 PM
Chapter 1 finished!

loveangel143
11-05-2011, 05:56 PM
Chapter 2 FINISHED

loveangel143
11-05-2011, 09:51 PM
I edited http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

bubblemint9
11-05-2011, 11:10 PM
A CREEPY TAXI DRIVER AND A KINDNAPED TEACHER!!!!!!!!!!!! EEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif

loveangel143
11-05-2011, 11:12 PM
Teacher? Director..

bubblemint9
11-05-2011, 11:17 PM
oops, director!

loveangel143
11-06-2011, 10:07 AM
I might write a chapter, what do you think everyone?

bubblemint9
11-06-2011, 10:09 AM
I vote yes!

loveangel143
11-06-2011, 04:36 PM
Anyone?

Balletgrl
11-06-2011, 04:39 PM
I SAY YESSR!

Sorries... I procrastinate too much and I told myself I was gonna get to this... but it took a while before I did... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

loveangel143
11-08-2011, 09:06 PM
XD!

fabiona12
11-08-2011, 09:21 PM
WHEN WILL U POST ANOTHER CHAPTER I LOVE THIS PLZ DONT MAKE ME WAIT IDONT LIKE WAITING AND THIS IS WHAT I DO WITH PUNCTUATION WHEN I AM IMPATIENT WHICH I GUESS I SHOULD NOT BE!

loveangel143
11-08-2011, 09:24 PM
OkcalmdownorIwon'twriteachaptertonightortomorrowso stopeatingsugarchildHMPH.

(got from ZuZu)

fabiona12
11-08-2011, 09:32 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

LOLZAKIDINMYCLASSDIDNOTKNOWHOWTOSPELLLOWHESPELTITL IKELOANDHEISINGRADE6SOMETIMESIDONTKNOWWHATSGOINGON INPEOPLE'SMINDS!!!!!!

skylight22
11-09-2011, 08:49 AM
Zuzuisveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryvery angrywithallthesecopiershewillnottolerateitnohewon 'tZuzudoesnotlikebeingcopiedandhewillneerstandfori tZuzuisangrynowZuzuisveryangryZuzuwilltellonyouall andyouwillfeelZuzu'swrathohyesyouwillhowdareyoupeo plecopyZuzunowZuzuisverysadandhewillnevereverbehap pyagainohnohewon'tandhewilltellonYoungGrasshopperV erityandYoungGrasshopperFionaohyeshewillyoujus**** chandkeepawayfromZuzuhehasablackbeltineverymartial artinexistencehelearntfromthegreatSenseiErinandZuz uisverygoodineverythingandheisveryclevertooandagoo dfighterandartistandmusiciansojustkeepawayfromZuzu doyouhear?

skylight22
11-09-2011, 08:51 AM
AndbythewayYoungGrasshopperVerityyouwillnevergeta1 %discountfromtheSenseieveragainyoutooFionathesense iisveryveryverystrictaboutcopierssodonotcopyanymor egotithuhhuhhuhhuhHMPH.

bubblemint9
11-09-2011, 06:15 PM
HUH? what about Zuzu and copyin'? who's Zuzu? who's copying and what are they copying and from whom?

loveangel143
11-09-2011, 07:08 PM
ZUZU IS BULLYING ME! I gonna call a mod!!!!

loveangel143
11-10-2011, 11:29 PM
Some of chapter 3 posted.

fabiona12
11-11-2011, 11:33 AM
yayz finally chapter 3 http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gif

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 06:11 PM
Chapter 3 Done! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

fabiona12
11-11-2011, 09:10 PM
awkardness.... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif(i am whistling with my eyes http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif)

nicole92598
11-11-2011, 09:51 PM
Some Comments on your story!
1) I love how it started out!
2) The My-Link notes should go in the Suggestion Box!
3) I like how Salacia got mad in the Taxi.
4) I love the story the most I read it!!
5) Keep it coming! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

nicole92598
11-11-2011, 09:55 PM
Also can I be included in some part?

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 09:58 PM
Chapter added!

Sure Nic! And thx!

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 10:04 PM
And yes, I know I stink at songwriting. I'm planning to sing it in real and post it here.

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 10:54 PM
Please..?

fabiona12
11-11-2011, 11:12 PM
plz wat? and yes do sing puhweezeies

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 11:14 PM
Well for starters (like me http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_razz.gif) I'll just sing a normal song. Let's see... How about Somebody by Lemonade Mouth? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
View My Video (http://forums.ubi.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/2081012249/m/2921098859?r=8611008069#8611008069)

fabiona12
11-11-2011, 11:18 PM
Originally posted by loveangel143:
Well for starters (like me http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_razz.gif) I'll just sing a normal song. Let's see... How about Somebody by Lemonade Mouth? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
View My Video (http://forums.ubi.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/2081012249/m/2921098859?r=8611008069#8611008069)

WHAT!! IT JUST TOOK ME HERE!!

loveangel143
11-11-2011, 11:19 PM
LOLZ! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif I PRANKED YOU!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/34.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_redface.gif <-- You

fabiona12
11-11-2011, 11:22 PM
Originally posted by loveangel143:
LOLZ! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif I PRANKED YOU!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/34.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_redface.gif <-- You

OH THATS RIGHT I AM!!!! UGH!!! I SHALL SEEK REVENGE, but after a cup of pretend hot chocolatehttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/53.gif

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 12:08 AM
More added to chapter 3!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 10:37 AM
Push

bubblemint9
11-12-2011, 11:19 AM
push?

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 11:21 AM
UP! PUSH UP!

fabiona12
11-12-2011, 11:26 AM
push what?

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 11:27 AM
The STINKIN' story! XD!

skylight22
11-12-2011, 11:37 AM
Originally posted by loveangel143:
ZUZU IS BULLYING ME! I gonna call a mod!!!!
Youwouldn'tdare. :P

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 01:15 PM
Me singing Star Spangled Banner-- hate my voice.
View (http://m.youtube.com/index?client=mv-google&desktop_uri=%2F&gl=US&rdm=4ok72tujt#/watch?v=ZlbHXowbrJA)

loveangel143
11-12-2011, 11:24 PM
Chapter added http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

artsaboveall
11-13-2011, 12:04 AM
Two words.
Utter.
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
How could you ever think of yourself as a bad writer??? You are an AMAZING WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 12:06 AM
OMG! I wish there was a word called YOUAREAWESOMENESSANDYOUKNOWIT,ILOVEYOURBOOK!

artsaboveall
11-13-2011, 12:12 AM
XD XD XD

Leonarda2011
11-13-2011, 09:19 AM
Wow thats nice! Keep writing! :happy:



Cornelia The Star

fabiona12
11-13-2011, 10:11 AM
Verz! your story has 66 replies and 745 or somrthing views. thats a lot. and you told me none of your stories were a success. don't lie to me miss. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 11:21 AM
awwz!

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 12:24 PM
Should I write a chapter...?

artsaboveall
11-13-2011, 12:30 PM
YES U SHOULD http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

bubblemint9
11-13-2011, 12:32 PM
YES! MORE! YES! MORE!
GIVE ME A W! *W* GIVE ME A R! *R* GIVE Me A I! *I* GIVE ME A T! *T* GIVE ME A E! *E* GIVE ME A M! *M* GIVE ME A O! *O* GIVE ME A R! *R* GIVE ME A E! *E* WHAT DOES THAT SPELL?!? WRITE MORE!!!

fabiona12
11-13-2011, 12:34 PM
write! but remember one thing when you are writing, and that is "Write Right" http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 06:02 PM
ME IS WRITING MOREZZZ... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Balletgrl
11-13-2011, 06:40 PM
AWH GOSHNESS!

Tanks yah for dedicating that chapter to meh! XD

I'm excitedness for the next chapter! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

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celina9
11-13-2011, 06:55 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gif Awesome story, and I love the name http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 08:41 PM
Dan- XD

Celina- Aww thanks! I love your banner!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 09:07 PM
Chapter added.... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Balletgrl
11-13-2011, 09:15 PM
ACH!

I LOVEZ it!

You caught the characters perfectly! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif I love how quirky my house is. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

I know its a ... long shot, but up... can you... maybe...

WRITE MORE!

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Pleases?

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

loveangel143
11-13-2011, 09:43 PM
YAHOO!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Courses!! http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

Balletgrl
11-13-2011, 09:52 PM
Tonight? Pleasness! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

I is more than likely not gonna be on tomorrow... XD

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

celina9
11-14-2011, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by loveangel143:
Dan- XD

Celina- Aww thanks! I love your banner!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Thx, but it is just really simple, nothing amazing like everyone else's banners here http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif