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Abelzorus-Prime
05-25-2016, 03:48 AM
Why can't I fly?
I asked the priest.
So God can lead you from the beast.

Why can't I fly?
I asked the captain.
To restrain you from your course of action.

Why can't I fly?
I asked the the king.
To prevent you from suffering

Why can't I fly?
I asked the Mentor.
Don't worry young eagle,
I will teach you how to soar

Jessigirl2013
05-25-2016, 07:03 PM
This is good don't know why it hasn't been commented on.:rolleyes:

Perhaps try to add some cool references into the games.

Abelzorus-Prime
05-25-2016, 10:26 PM
What do you mean by that? In addition to or into the poem?

SpiritOfNevaeh
05-25-2016, 10:52 PM
I love me some poetry. Nice work :)

cawatrooper9
05-26-2016, 08:53 PM
Actually, I kind of like how it doesn't directly reference the games. It easily fits in to the Assassins Creed series without becoming too cheesey about it.

Nice job! ;)

Ureh
05-29-2016, 05:29 AM
The old man on the mountain who seems to have all the answers.

I really like it too. Thank you for sharing.