Fanfic: When I was Rayman | Forums

[caitlin23]

Here is my new fanfic. I hope you like it!

[Raydragon]

I don't see anything.

[caitlin23]

(P.S. The characters are not based on real life.)

Chapter one: Strange Happinings.

"Jhon!" "Time for bed!"Shouted my mum.
I sighed. I was playing Rayman 3: Hoodlum Havoc on my Xbox and was very close to completing it. "But mum!" I shouted. "I'm nearly at Reflux!"
"Well, I'm sure Reflux can wait till tomorrow." She said.
I sighed. It was pretty late. "Alright mum."
On the way to the stairs I paused to look at my Xbox. "I wonder what it would be like if I was Rayman."
I wondered, before trudging up the stairs.

Well, what do you think?

[Rayman_Addict41]

Nice. A bit short though.

[caitlin23]

I might write some more today, if not, I will try tomorrow.

[caitlin23]

Chapter two: A new body

Yawning,I slowly climbed out of bed.I always went to my bedroom mirror to brush my hair before having brakfast and today was no different. Still bleary-eyed with sleep, it took me a while to realise today I looked a little diferent...
When my tired brain finally realised what I looked like I stepped back in shock.
Over night, I had become Rayman.

[Sludge1994]

http://sludgefactory.roflforum.net/forum.htm

yo

[Rayman_Addict41]

Niice. It'll be interesting to see how his classmates react. Unless he's in Rayman's world that is...

[Raydragon]

Originally posted by Sludge1994:
http://sludgefactory.roflforum.net/forum.htm

yo

Dude, no offense, but could you not advertise things in topics that have nothing to do with that forum? People find it very annoying. It's already in your sig.

On topic. Nice idea. The only thing I don't like is that the chapters are far too short. Apart from that, it's going well so far.

[Milaneselololol]

Originally posted by caitlin23:
(P.S. The characters are not based on real life.)

That's nice to know... Helps keep those lawsuits away.