Originally posted by Worf101:
Pretty good in a "Twilight Zone" or "Night Gallery" sort of way. Only suggestion I'd make is you need to have the victim be perhaps a bit more "evil". I mean he's playing a "game", does he deserve the Zombie treatment of being a drunk middleaged, sim pilot.
Now if he were a card carrying neonazi who delighted at killing, simulated or not, now that might deserve some otherworldly justice. As it is this guys as innocent as the phantoms he's supposedly killed.
Just my suggestion.