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I feel duty bound to make another sequal alongside my other. Here we go folks.
Jade saved the prisoners and headed home with Double H and Pey'j. Back at the lighthouse, problems arose. The upper rooms were blased away by the Alpha sections and needed to be rebuilt. Back problem, a small domz had infected Pey'j. They now had to find and antidote before it was too late. Now on with this story. "Pey'j, are you alright?" asked Jade when she saw Pey'j not eating dinner again. "Just don't have an appitite tonight." "You said that at breakfast. That's it, I'm taking you to the doctor." "No, I'm fine. I survived 3 weeks without food." "And nearly died thanks to it." Jade muttered under her breath. "I heard that." The kids slept in the living room for 5 days while Jade, Pey'j and HH rebuilt their rooms and the roof. The adults laid blankets outside near the meditation rock. Once the light house was finished except for the light and shield, Yoa came to Jade. "Jade, I saw something on Pey'j's hand. It was green and looked like it had tenticles. And he's been rather edgey lately." "That does it. I'm dragging him to the doctor. Thanks for telling me Yoa." "No, I won't go!" Pey'j said stubbornly when Jade tried to pull him. "There is something wrong with your hand and you need to get it fixed." "Fine, if it will make you stop acting like a mother hen, I'll go to the doctor." At the doctor's, his problem was diognosed. "It's a Domz life sucker. We have to remove it or it will kill him." Pey'j kept muttering under his breath about this nonsence but no one payed attention to him. "How soon can you fix it?" Jade asked. "As soon as he's ready." "He's ready." Jade said promply. "Hold it one minute." said Pey'j."Just what exactly will you do?" "It's simple, I have the antidote and I inject it to the life sucker and it's gone." "That simple, huh? Alright." The doctor took a large needle and filled it with green fluid. When it was full, he brought it to Pey'j and injected it into the sucker. The sucker shrank slowly and then dissolved. "All fixed. He needs to eat well, get lots of rest, and to drink this mixture for five days before bed." He handed a sachel of powder to Jade. "One more thing. I hate bringing it up but..." "Yes, yes, the payment." Jade said impatienctly. "How much?" "1500 units." Jade sighed and trasfered the units from her account to the doctor's. "Sufficiant, yes? Thank you so much for the help doc. We will follow your instructions. Let's go home Pey'j." They got back in the hovercraft and Pey'j dosed off till they got home. Once back at the lighthouse, Jade took Pey'j up to his room and got him to bed. Downstairs all the kids had questions. "Is uncle Pey'j OK?" asked Fehn. "What's wrong with him?" came from Kip. "Why is he in bed so early?" out of the youngest Oumi. "Let Jade talk!" shouted Zaza standing on the table waving her arms. "Thank you Zaza. In order of questions, yes he's okay, he had a domz life sucker stuck to him, and he's in bed on doctors orders. Does that satisfiy your curiosities?" Of course it didn't. "What's a Domz life sucker?" "What doctor?" "What other orders did he make for Uncle Pey'j?" Jade sat down and told them the whole story. They went to bed after saying good-night to Pey'j, who had taken the mixture and was going to bed.Jade turned out the light and went to bed. To be continued. |
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The next day, a mission Mdisk arived for Jade from the Governer of Hillys. It read: Jade, a Domz ambassador has arrived to discuss a surrender and to meet you. They claim you are one of their people and belong on their home world with them. Please come to the Pedestrian District behind the fountain, where the Alphas used to have their HQ. Hurry.
That's all it said. "I don't think you should go Jade," said Pey'j when she told him."This things were looking for you for years and who knows what they'll do if they get their hands on you?" "I know it's dangerous but I want to know what they want with me," answered Jade resonably. "Well then, I'm comming with you." "Fair enough." Later that day, they left for Pedestrian District and went behind the fountain and to the old Alpha hq. They met the governer and the ambassador. They ambassador was tall, green and had black hair, he had large black eyes and visible veins beneth the skin of the face. It was obvious it was male but a very ugly one. "Welcome Jade. This is ambassador Michelvarny and he has come to offer surrender and to talk to you about taking you to his world Isredia in system nine." "Thank you governer," Michelvarny said in a deep voice. "You see, you won when you killed our king and, not only that, you exposed the Alphas. We lost and can admit it. As far as you comming back with me, you are a Domz, hidden by a human body. You are part human, I don't deny that, since you have been bonded to the body so long, but your blood is that of a princess. Forgive me governer. I was staring a story and I forgot my manners. Please be seated." He gestured to the chairs in the room and everyone sat down. "You see, your mother and father were the rightful rulers of our world. Doministat was an advisor to them and a trusted one at that. He plotted behind therir backs and turned the people against them but not you. You were the power source but no one really knew why. He got the people to behead your parents and name him king and put you as a mere servant girl. Pey'j was indeed a friend to the royal family and your god-father. He took you away in hopes of weakening the sergoat king but it failed. He terrorised many planets in search of you and took people to drain enery from them to servive to find you. On Hillys he knew you were close. He sensed you and waited for you to come to him. He didn't expect to have been found out and have the Hillian army stop him. You are now the rightful ruler. Long story short, you're our queen and we need you to come back to Isredia." Jade sat there stunned, trying to absorb everything she heard. She was a queen or a princess, whatever, and she was needed on a planet she's never known to rule people she's never met with customs unknown to her and she was only 20 years old had no idea as of how to rule anyone. And she doesn't even know who her parents were. "I realize I may have provided you with alot of information to quickly. Take your time and consider what I've told you. If you decide to come to Isredia, contact me by email. I'll be here until the surrender papers are drawn up and signed. I hope you consider to come home. Good-day." Jade left in a daze back to the lighthouse, Pey'j had to drive and tell the kids that Jade wasn't feelig well. She went to Meditation rock and started thinking. to be contiued |
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"I'm a princess, a ruler. What am I supposed to do?"Jade thought as she sat on the rock. It was impossible. It was absurd. It was true. How was she to chose to go to lead those who needed her and staying with the kids and Pey'j. Her friends were here and supposedly her people were there. She couldn't leave the kids, but people needed her more. What is she supposed to do?
"Jade?" She looked up and saw Yoa standing over her. "What is it Yoa, is something wrong?" "Yes, you. You haven't said anything since you got back. And you haven't told us what happened." "Long story. I'll summarize. I'm a princess of the Domz and they want me to rule them. That means I’ll have to leave you behind if I go. I don’t want to leave, I grown attached to you kids and all the Hillians. But other people need me and ya’ll have Pey’j. What do you suggest?†“Well, I don’t really want you to go. We all love you and you don’t have to go.†I know, I know. But, I was born to these people. I might learn who my parents were and find out how I was a power source to the thing that killed my parents." "Couldn't we go with you?" "Not a bad idea. I wonder if Ambassador Michelvarny will alow it. I'll ask him. Don't tell the others until I get permission." "OK" Yoa went back inside and left Jade alone. Jade started thinking of how to ask Michelvarny about the kids and Pey'j. She had an idea. Michelvarny had given her his email adress and told her to email him. She looked through her SAC and found... Secundo. "Yade, what are you doing?" "I'm looking for the email address for Ambassador Michelvarny. I want to send him an email asking for permission to take Pey'j and the kids to Isredia with me." "Why are you going to Isredia?" She told him the whole story. "So, Secundo, where is the email adress?" "Right here, Yade." "Thank you." She sent him and email : Ambassador Michelvarny, this is Jade. I wish to go to Isredia but I have a request. May I take my uncle Pey'j and the kids whom I'm responsible for? They don't wish to be left alone and I will miss them as well. Please return email as soon as you can. Thank you. "Well that's taken care of. Now on to other disasters." She went back inside to find Yoa telling Pey'j her talk with Jade. "She said we might be able to go along and not to tell the others till she got permission." "That's right, Yoa," said Jade, interuping the conversation. "And I just sent an email to the ambassador and I should recive an email soon with the permission, and you go upstairs and let me talk to Pey'j." "Yes Jade." To be continued |
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I see how Jade is torn. Im a princess, too. Im faced with simillar descisions every day.
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Thank you....I think. Are you man, woman, vegtable or mineral?
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Im an enigma.
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Whoa. Reminds me of Episode I(And thats good for me) for some reason...
Is Pey'J gonna take the place of Yoda? I can see it now.. "Master Pey'J, there seems to be a disruption in the force.." "Reckon so, I do." "Should we continue with the plan?" "Mister, Negative. Sit here and fix machines, we will." "But what of the soldiers? What should we tell them?" "Carne, Chili Con." "Using No Way as Way; Using No Limitation as Limitation" -Bruce Lee |
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Everyone will like what's comming and no i will not tell anyone what I'm planning.
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Pwnage happens. Dont go, Jade! ITS A TRAP!!
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You're crazier than me Thunder.
Anyway. Here we go. "What is it Jade?" Pey'j asked suspiciously. "Why are you asking permission to go to Iserdia and bring us along?" "The kids don't want me to leave and I don't want to leave them and the Ambassador says the people there want me to be their Queen or Princess or whatever and I can't refuse," she said matter of factly. "Have you forgotten these are the DomZ we're talking about? They tried to kill you! And all of Hillys." "Trying to find me. That 'thing' I fought was using me as a power source." "What if they're trying to trick you?" "That's the main reason I'm going, to find the truth." Pey'j sighed and Jade smiled insolently "I love being a nucence." "You do it so well." Upstairs, Yoa listened to Jade and Pey'j talking. She hoped that she could go with Jade. She kept her word and didn't tell the others, but that didn't stop her from getting the others to listen with her. "Do you think the Ambassador will let us come?" asked Fehn. "I hope so, I don't want Jade to go," said Kip. "What are you worried about? If we can't go we'll go anyway, hidden in the plane." said Zaza boldly. "If we're caught we won't go anywhere." Oumi hissed. "We won't get caught," Pablo said bracingly. "Guess again," Yoa muttered. They all looked up to see Jade standing over them. "Uh-oh." said Fehn. "I just got the Email and you can come to Isredia with us so stop speculateing that you'll come, you are." Jade said with an amused smile. The kids looked at each other and started cheering. They were going with Jade. To be continued. |
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Go on..tell us more and then email it to that really mean guy who made BG&E, he might actually bother doing something about it and make a sequel...cheese...
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You recieve an F in random linking for not integrating it properly into your scentence in a relavant manner.
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That means so much comming from a phsyco.
Anyway... The kids stared packing and Pey'j got the hovercraft/Beluga ready to go. Jade went to the Governer's office to talk to Michelvarny. She found him and the Governer signing something on her desk. "Very well Governer. The treaty is signed, all demands are met and Her Majesty is at the door." The Governer looked at the door and saw Jade standig there quietly. "Come in Jade. We just signed every thing and the Domz will be leaving soon. I assum you'll be going with them?" "Yes, ma'am. The kids and Pey'j are comming with me." She glared at the Ambassador, daring him to desput it. When he didn't she addressed him. "Ambassador, I still have a few questions. If we may discuss it in private..." She trailed off hopeing he would get it. "Please come with me to my ship and we'll discuss all the details, You Majesty." He made a deep bow to her. "Governer." He made a quicker bow to him. Jade followed him to his ship just outside the Pedestrian District. They went inside to a room Jade guessed was his study room. On a table were Hillian cookies and hot tea. They sat down and had a little to eat and then went right to it. "Now, Majesty, you had questions for me?" "Yes. How am I to lead these people? I know nothing of them, or thier culture, or anything. What amd I supossed to do?" "You will have advisors and counsolers to help you and teach our customs. And I will be on hand if needed. There's nothing to worry about. Isredia is a wealthy and prosporus planet. We mine jade, and onyx, and many other gems there and sell them to other planets. The children play in the parks and rivers. The adults go about thier daily lives much like they do here. But people are confused and looking for someone to help make decsions like the Governer does here. You're imortant Jade. You are out Queen and you must lead us." "But how? Even with these advisors and things I still won't know everything like I would if I had been there all my life." "That's just it. Youmight not know us but Shauni does. She is still in you and she was born on Isredia so maybe she will help you." Jade sighed and looked at him. "Alright. When do we leave?" "The day after tommorow." Michelvarny answered promply. "I'll go and tell the others. Thank you for your time." "My pleasure. Your Majesty." To be continued |
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"Final call for fight to Isredia. Flight to Isredia now boarding." An announcer said over the P.A.
"Come on kids. We got to go," said Pey'j. "Comming." said 6 little voices. Jade was already headed for the cat walk to board the private shuttle. She was excited, anxious and set her face to be unfeeling. She wanted this but wasn't sure she was ready. To rule an entire planet was mind-boggling. Once aboard the shuttle, Jade took her seat next to the window. She watched as they took off and saw Hillys, the only home she'd ever known, fade out of sight. Hours later she saw a greenish-blue planet come into view. She sighed and mentaly prepared herself. They landed and she steped outside. There to greet her was Michelvarny. "Your Majesty, I'm so glad you made it here safely. Follow me to the Palace." "Palace?" Jade asked confused. "Your home." Jade followed him to a hover-limo waiting outside the airport. She saw the stares from the people around her. A few knew who she was and bowed or curtsied. She looked out the window of the limo and saw the Palace. It was huge! 7 stories at least with spires, flags and weapons. Statues, fountains, and gardens all around the place. Jade steped out of the car. She 2 maybe 3 steps before she senced it. A dagger came at her. She didn't think. She consintrated on stoping the dagger. Her eyes went completely green, and she raised her hand and the knife stopped in mid-air, a few feet away from her hand. She moved her hand and the dagger fell to the ground. Her eyes wnet normal and she stared at the dagger, stunned. "Bravo, Majesty. Excelent refexes." Said Michelvarny, clapping his hands. "Are you telling me that was a test?" Jade asked outraged. "No. It was to prove to you that you are, indeed, Queen. Only the royal bloodline females are able to levitate objects and create forcefeilds and other such things to protect themselves. Your mother could, your grandmother could and so forth. Your instincts kick in and you protect yourselves and those you're responsible for. Your uncle and those childern for instice. When you have children you will protect them in the same way." "Uh-huh. Who threw the dagger?I wish to congragulate him on his perfect aim." She said dangerously. "You will meet him later. He is your Captain of the Guard, Gregorian. He's for your protection." "My own captaian of the guard tryed to kill me?" "No. If you hadn't reacted in time, he or I would have stoped the knife. We can shot balls on energy at objects to move them or knock them off course. We are your cousins of sort on your Father's side. We're brother's Gregorian and I. Please follow me to the trone room where your reception awaits." "I can't wait," Jade muttered dryly. They went inside and saw the entry hall. A huge flying buttrices and arched columns. On the walls were paintings Jade could only assume were of the royal families that came before her. Marble statues of beautiful ladies and hansome men lined the walls between the paintings. On to the center of the Palace they went. When they got there. She saw a gold, jade, and emerald covered throne with bright blue cusions. Lining the steps to the trone were lades and men who had to be nobles of the court. They bowed and curtiesd deeply at the sight of her and the others. Michelvarny stepped forward. "My lords and ladies of Isedia, I present the Queen of our fair land, Shauni. The true blood daughter of King Dalinrus and Queen Amaya. Long live the true Queen!" The nobles repeated him: "Long live the Queen! Long live the Queen." Jade stared at the people cheering her and said nothing. Michelvarny came back to her and said quietly: "Go and sit on the throne and thank them. After you have greeted them you may dismiss them and go to your chambers. I'll send a maid to take you and your family to your rooms." Jade acquiesced and went to the throne, in her T-shirt, jeans, and headband, looking hardley like a queen, much less a noble. But she held her head high and sat on the throne. The ladies first came and curtsied to her and kissed her hand. The men then came and bowed and kissed her hand as well. They were introduced ladies: Amilia, Kari, Nichol, Kira, Abigall, Zira, and Shenna. Lords: Harbord, John, Stevens, Brian, Don, Nicklerin, and Lanaus. "Thank you for your warm reception," Jade said formally. "You are dismissed." The nobles bowed one last time and left to thire own rooms or homes. A maid about 35 came to Jade and lead her to her room. When asked she said Pey'j and the kids were already in their own rooms asleep. Her name was Daniel and would serve her faithfully. She helped Jade into a white night gown and into bed. Jade was asleep before she knew her eyes were closed. To be continued. |
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Jade woke up the next morning, not knowing where she was, when the memory hit her. She was on Isredia, this kids and Pey'j were here too. She was Queen and had no idea of what to do. She sat up and saw Daniel cleaning out the ash tray into a basin and washing her hands. She turned and saw Jade up.
"Good morning Your Majesty. What would you like to wear today? Your wardrobe is right over here. Pick out a dress and I'll help you." Confused by the directness of her maid Jade did as she was told. She opened the wardrobe and saw 14 dresses, most in green. She picked out an off the shoulder one that went down to mid-shin. Daniel helped her into it and she stepped infront of the mirrior. Jade liked what she saw, but it didn't look much like her. "Why can't I wear what I always wear?" She asked Daniel. "Because, it doesn't become a Queen. You must look like the royalty you are and wear the robes of state. Besides, you must appear confident before the people and can't look confident in those rags." Jade curbed her impateince at haveing her favorite clothes called rags, she looked at the dress and decided that is wasn't so bad. "Come, Majesty. Breakfast is ready in your private dining room." Jade followed her to the dining room, doing her best not to trip in the unfamilar shoes. In the room were a few of the Ladies of the court, Amilia, Kira, Kari, and Zira. Amilia was tall,dressed in a blue dress whis silver embrodery.Kira and Kari, twin sister, were in yellow gowns that went down to the ankels. Zira, the oldest of the ladies, was in a simple gray gown with a rope belt across the waist. They all rose when Jade entered and curtsied. Jade curtsied back and sat in her place at the table. Looking to left and right of her plate, she saw 3 differnt forks, 2 knives, and 4 spoons. Hopeing breakfast was simple Jade waited to be served. |
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