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Almost disscussion I've been on someone said something about a seaquel even just someone randomly saying, off topic, we need a seaquel, so heres my ideas on the game and a seaquel.

First, for all those people who wonder about some things in the game, heres my views. About her mother and father and how they were connected I think she came from a long line of people who knew about the Domz and shawni.I think many centuries ago the Domz were a race of magical beings having one great leader (and I don't mean the priest by this, your understand later) and their other leader/power source,I haven't decided yet, Shawni. But one day humans, Jade's ansestors, came and took Shawni for reasons unknow to us now (I haven't decided that either). Once they did this they infused it with them (I know that sounds disgusting, I couldn't think of better wording) so over many years it would get passed down from generation to generation until it got to Jades parents, either one, and the Domz finally found them so in fear for their new born, Jade, they fled and gave Jade to their close friend Pay'j. Now by this time, the Domz having power source, they had evolved into evil, life sucking parasites(wow this is starting to sound like lawyers,lol).Many years later Jade has grown up with Pay'j, while he created Iris, knowing jades secret all the time. The Domz had finally found this planet and started doing what they where doing, with the Alfa sections and so forth. And it turns out she too has also had Shawni passed down to her.This also the background of the story and you know the game so I'll now tell you about my ideas for a sequel...



It will start off with a few days after her big victory over the Domz and she's back at home with the orphans and Pay'j and everything starts to go back normal to even before the Alfa Sections when she gets a mesage to go to the capital (new map an area unreachable earlier because of closed areas) so she goes and meets the govener and others including the Iris. They say that the Iris network will become part of the outward government and they'd like her to work for them as a reporter and spie. Of course she says yes and they go into a more secret room and begin to talk about how the totally infected people of Hillys that became Alfa Sections are no longer under control of the Domz yet are getting no better and and they partly infected ones(kind of like Pay'j) aren't getting worse yet neither getting better. So they ask you to find why, you say yes and they continue, they say that they also say that raido, or whatever they have there, connection was reestablished after the defeat of the Domz since the Alfas stopped it "for portection". And a few planets say the samething that happened to Hillys is happening there, meaning there are other places where Domz existed besides on and around Hillys. So this means there is another, greater being than the priest out there (which makes sence since he's only a priest right?) and it must be stopped and thats your job. Theres a pause and you are certainly overwhelmed but you say you'll do it but they need to give you some time and money before you start. They agree and at this point Double H walks in and says he will help you when ever possible. They give you M-disk(I still have no idea what the M means) that tells you extra info about whats going on and other tidbits. After that long cinimatic is over as you walk out the guy who protended to be Mr.Decastalak stops you and asks if you would like to help with the cleaning up of the Domz on the planet before going and for the first time on the game you actualy choose to take a quest or not,so you say yes or maybe later(you can go back and do it if you like)then you leave, go to lighthouse(or wherever really, that part isn't cinimatic, and there's lots of new places to explore since the war ended), so you go around the lighthouse and there is new things to get like there was at the beginning exept different items since it's a new game and there are no longer K-bups since the Nutripils factory shut-down, no longer being owned by the Domz. But when you meet Pay'j
he says you have a call from the Science place that gave you your first take pictures of all the creatures mission and you go over and they say they heard about the Domz and what you did and they thank you and would like to have pictures of these creatures and would still like you take take pictures of all the creatures. So you go around and buy items with the bit you got from Iris and the money you get from photographing the new animals or go on that mission he offers you until your ready to go to the closes infested planet and thats the first of the game. And I have some things to say about the game I couln't incorperate into the beginning, like about the picture the Domz mission I know your thinking thats not much of a mission right?, well those worlds that are infested had been infested before they came up with the ingiunous Alfa Sections idea so on a lot of these planets there are Domz just around the planet, and some don't even hurt you or they're like rats they don't do much until you step on one. Also about the super glowing mysticle version of Jade that only happens a certain times, like when she's in trouble, like, hugh about to die, planned for the story line, sort of trouble for a cinimatic or like in Link when has the ability to turn into this really powerful guy, but only when fighting a boss. Also I think Jade should get weapons upgades on different planets like you could, on the first planet buy from a vendor an upgrade for the Dai-Jo stick to make it a martial arts stick for $6,000(upgrades don't come cheap), or an upgrade for the gyro disk shooter to a gyro disk blaster because right now all it can do is press buttons and kill rats and this upgrade will make it have 1/4 the power of one hit of the Dai-Jo stick and be able to do speical things that the Dai-Jo can do in one, like break Alfa Section air tanks Wink, or I would like an upgade for the camra so it can auto select the nearest target by you pressing a button.


But now I also planned the ending with the inevoidable final boss...


After going to a overrun planet where the Domz took over or sucked the life out of everyone there and finding leader that you beat into telling you where the main Domz planet is and killing him you return home. You tell the Iris network everything and you find Double H who had come back since he had injured himself headbutting a door that was too thick even for him. Being fully recovered and hitting it soooo
hard he remembered everything he had forgoten he asks to join you again and you say yes. At this point Pay'j walks in and says he's going with you, you try to change his mind but fail him saying it his duity to protect you and this is why he started Iris in the first place. So you get the Beluga and jump to the corrinents with the warp drive you buy at Mamago's do your whole sneaking around and fighting thing until you get to the Boss. You walk in and the door behind you slams shut and in the room has many holes and is very rocky and more like a decrepid doengon than a throne room. And in the center is leader of the Domz the beginning of it all THE QUEEN DOMZ! She didn't start out like this but over time as the Domz became parasites she became what she is(and that happens to be very ugly). She explains this to you and her side of the whole story of what happened and how she found Jade's parents and finding they no longer possesed Shawni killed them and started looking for you. Then she yells "But you have come to me Shawni! And you shall die with your human self to join your parents!!!!! But first we shall do away with this one!" And with saying this takes Pay'j and throws him hiigh into the air hitting the other side of the 200 ft. room and falling to the ground. When she does you scream incredibly loud "NO!" and fall to your knees crying and Double H yells "Chief!". After a few seconds of her laughing(more like cackling very loudly) it shows you looking at the ground on your knees then you looking up with terribly sadness and incredible incerating anger( which would be the first time in the game I mean she been lots of other emotions: sad, relieved, worried, even enoyed yet never angery) then your eyes begin to glow, brighter and brighter until you get up and your staff begins to glow like it does in a specal attack and the disk shooter glows a greenish purple as the power inside you grows to its full power in your anger. You then say "You will regret that(or some other cool thing)". The Queen yells,"What is this! No matter you death shall be no matter what happens!" So then because of your new found power your damage doubles in everything, your whirlwind attack becomes a flurry attack allowing you to attack all monsters surrounding you multible times very quickly, your special move makes all of you glow brighly instead of just your staff and sends you like 10 ft in to the air and sends out a shock wave, you pretty much turn super powerful. Then when you fight the Queen she sends out waves of all the Domz creatures you've ever fought (including ones in the sequel) and ones like the reaper that use Pay'J as shields(which seems to happen a lot) or other such things they'll use rocks or other such things. And then between waves he'll have a chance to attack the Queen herself using some combination of attacks that you can or the creators can make up, until she's finally dead. When she dies you smile but then look down sadly remembering Pay'j, then you hear a sound and Pay'j say "why you look so sad sweetheart?" You look up as Pay'j stands up and you smile. Pay'j says with a smile," I told you these jet boots come in handy!" You smile a smile that means it's over and it's going to be OK. The you fall on the ground unconscious. You wake up in the same bed you did the first time you fell unconscious because of the Domz. You find out all infected people got better quickly after the Queen's death and all Domz creatures seem to have died also. Pay'j walks over to you and says "I guess it's over, it's finally over." And Jade says" no it isn't and it never will be."
 
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i read the first paragraph, and i like the drive and the initiative, it's all technically great ideas. But. this has the feeling of a newb text. it doesn't really have a strength or pattern to it, it's like you've randomly sat down at the computer and blurted stuff which you thought might be cool... now, there's nothing wrong with that, but it's better if you work it out in your mind first, come up with a pitch, pretend that tomorrow, you're going to stand with Michael Ancel in front of an Ubisoft panel, and you've gotta sell BG&E2 to them. From what i've read, it's kinda scatty... maybe tomorrow you could sit down, go through this again, try and built a little more detail and passion into it and really describe the whole story, rather than blurted passages...

no offence, as i say, you're ideas are interesting... but try to be a little more thorough Wink.


 
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I get what you mean, in fact what your saying may make more sence than you know.For one about the newbish text, if you looked at my profile you'd see that my user was created the day that discussion was made.But although it's true the user is new I am a veterian forumer. And I understand that it's a little choppy, but I had spent almost three hours writing it (although it may not seem like it) and after a while I started to get a little tired. But another reason it was unfinished was I couldn't decide some things and I want to set up a pole. Just post saying yea or nea and give your views:

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  • Which parent should be part of the Shawni line?


  • Should Jade die at the end, because of the death of the Domz?


  • Should Double H get his memory back?


  • Why did the humans(Jade's ansestors) take Shawni?


  • What should the new items be?


  • Should there be new characters and what should their names and traits be?

    Post your views, and any other ideas for the story. Happy
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    1. neither, although i'd like to keep her true origins a secret. maybe go into a little detail, but not much. if it were me, i wouldn't say that it was from either side, that she was infected or that she was purely created, that it was invested in her by conisidence, of that she was mitten by xombie domz, i really wouldn't want to say too much about where it came from because it's so mysterious.

    2. no, Shauni should die. she should go back to being Jade, JAde who lives on hyllis, Jade who resides in a lighthouse with her pig hybrid uncle, Jade with a heart of gold, Jade the reporter who makes cash from taking pictures. not that she really needs it after the hundreds of thousands that i found for her, but moving on. Jade is the most normal character in the game. she has the most gorgeous face, the best expressions, the most wonderful eyes, the best personality, and is asthetically the most normal. every other character is slightly deformed in some way, they gave a huge head or massive shoulders or small legs or they're a hybrid to mention a few... Jade is, if nothing else, the sense of relation in the game; it would be totally alien as a concept if it weren't for Jade there for us to relate to.

    3. he has it back. it was only temprary... try to keep up Wink Razz

    4. none of your business. get out my ear!

    5. hmm, good question. i think the new items should be totally integral to the gameplay, but she won't need too many. a flash grenade of some kinda would be interesting, or a form of mdisk that blinds on impact. maybe some form of ether mine that knocks unconcious on explosion, both could be used to different effect on different creatures. the most important things though, are not items. they are abilities and knowledge. for example, the battle structure i think should be slightly more complicated, not much, but a bit. i think that she should have a couple more power attacts that strengthen through time, but again, not too many or it becomes cliche. at times like this we can turn to Chaos Legion and Zelda for inspiration; Link had those spherical attacks that were often integral to the gamplay, and often had to use the different arrows for different purposes. Chaos Legion, on the other hand, had one of the worst gamplay styles i've ever seen, but the theme was clever... you started out with this immensely powerful soul creature, capable of attacking and defeating most enemies, but it is stolen from you, broken and scattered very early on, after only one level. you them feel like it's a challenge to get it back, and every level that you pick up one of the 9 pieces needed to restore it is a real effort and very rewarding. An idea that could be drawn from this is the idea of Jade losing shauni; the Domz Priest did say "you are losing control of your spirit shauni", and i think that Jade should get drained at some point, the rest of the game having to draw it back in. this opens up ideas for energy bars, upgrades, alternative uses for the PA1s... the list is so extensive that it's ridiculous. of course, some of this wouldn't fit BG&E, and those decisions are up to Ancel and his team. all this is just theoretucal.

    6. i don't think we could possibly introduce new characters because it wouldn't be believable, we'd be putting our own characters into the game and that just wouldn't wash.

    yeah, i noticed that it was your first post, and i think it was great to see it just kinda flowing onto the forum...all i'm saying about your descriptions is that it has the ability to seemingly gloss over the most important things and focus on the insignificant stuff, and that you should focus on the whole picture instead of just solid details... for example, you said "what should the new items be", which just seems kinda closed and simple. you just can't give short simple ansewrs about a game like this which has so much perfect detail. imo, anyway.


     
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