Nah, com'on, I am just some obsessed fan, I don't even have any copy right to the game.

I just intend it as a fanfic first for the community here, to end this mindless discussion if TT is better than KB or not and to live the old feeling of the SoT-franchise up.
And to show Ben Mattes the middle finger.

Right now I am discussing with BSoD about certain plotholes and Warrior-within volunteered to beta read it.
I don't think a big team would bring much anyway.

I think it'll be possible to organise a boxing match between Ben Mattes and you if you have such a big problem with the man.

Would that settle all your pet peeves about this video game?

Maybe, if I get some teeths out

@EDIT:
BTW, what would you like to see in KB anyway?

I can remember the old discussions about what people wanted to see in the finale or expected, but I am too lazy to look for those threads again ...huh,maybe they were already deleted.

The Story concept per se is finished( What I and BSOD concluded so far) and soon I will be with the first chap, but what am I doing right now is going more and more back to the dark theme of WW. Well, considering what is happening story wise, it's no wonder. But the SoT theme should also show it's colours during the chappies, and it'S quite hard =/

I guess this is the problem with fanfics...the writing and inventing gets to subjective,and the perspective of individuals are really different.
But I don't want to disappoint the SoT fans,so alittle motivation and inspiration could help.

So, just imagine I am actually doing actually the game, so just write me some PMs what would you like to see,what do you expect or guess is going to happen.Or send me some OCs and enemy ideas, but please no mary sues ;_;

And one more thing, how long could've the game been? I am thinking it would take 16 hours long to beat it,maybe 18,like WW.
But I guess it's Babylon,so the story could be longer,no?

Oh and Rob, don't worry about my hatred to Ben.
mornegroth gave me a new indepth of the production of TT ;D

Hey, I'm back.
I am sorry for this loooong delay. I have been taking some writing courses to improve myy writing, I'll also travel through Greece to get more cultural inspiration. After I am done with my exams and hopefully Iran has calmed down, I'd try and visit Persepolis and the Pasargadai. Maybe Babylon too, but I doubt it.

Also I have been reading several books about Persian and Babylonian history and culture and philosophy so I can put KB into the right direction.
I have a theory that the Prince is not a full-blood Persian, he is more of a Half-Babylonian. Persia's policy is known that the Kings/Princes married really often foreign Princesses and Queens to have a stable external policy, also to support Pan-Persianism. If you read the Shahnahme, most heros and kings were only half Persians.

So,enough talk, I've decided to write a little smaller chapters around 6,000 words,but update them more often to keep the activity.So the update will come soon.

And Grafferu, I hope you enjoy reading it 8D

Thats nice Tristan , I wish you luck with this . And I'm looking forward to it

lets hope it doesnt take you much time i´ll be waiting for it!

Done. Finally got the first chapter.

The reason why it took so long was figuring the emotional level of the Prince. He's a good guy, I know that, but he is still an unstable man, suffering under several neuroses. And I wanted to make sure I don't put him into some sappy emo. And I have no one to discuss with it.

I'll add the chapter as soon as my new beta reader have been through it. WW_2 has been missing for a long time.

You can still enter Iran through Iraqi Kurdistan. I went to Sulaymaniyah and look what I found:


I hear there's ton of these tombs/caves in Sanandaj, Iranian Kurdistan where it's pretty save.

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Originally posted by Tristan_129:
Done. Finally got the first chapter.

The reason why it took so long was figuring the emotional level of the Prince. He's a good guy, I know that, but he is still an unstable man, suffering under several neuroses. And I wanted to make sure I don't put him into some sappy emo. And I have no one to discuss with it.

I'll add the chapter as soon as my new beta reader have been through it. WW_2 has been missing for a long time.

great!!