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Hey all..this is my first movie,i hope you enjoy it and give me some feedbackSmile
Video is 25mb and Divx 5.1 compressed.
http://download.go-legion.com/lomac/downloads/movies/Fire%20your%20guns.avi
 
Posts: 37 | Registered: Fri November 22 2002Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Okie... Dokie...

If this is your first movie then you did GREAT, heck, I've made about 20 short video's and still not good enough to share with the world, lol....

but JMO hints/comments:

1. Great Song, I forgot all about AC/DC songs, quite a few of them would make great video soundtracks, time to break out my collection and upload to PC, lol.

2. It started good and exciting with the quick dogfighting and flying at the beginning, but the middle dragged out... it's a good idea not to show more then 5 seconds of a fly by, unless telling a story. you did a fly by of the carrier, then a city, then a bridge, then went to bomb a target... breack up those fly bys with in the video...

3. the bombing run was sweet, what camera did you use for that?

4. then you landed on a airfield! hey didn't you take off from a carrier... what, were you transferring aircraft after a mission, lol, just kidding with you, it makes no difference, a game, but I don't think that happens to often in real life, (but what do I know, I was an Army man, not Navy.) lol

1st video, great job... better then any of my learning videos... just cut down of the fly bys and put more action into it. (thers videos every where where people fly fast and low, thou cool, gets boring after a while, I want more action and killing in my videos, lol.)

Hope you don't take this wrong, I'm not ditchin you, just giving honest feedback.
Smile
 
Posts: 51 | Registered: Fri May 07 2004Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Thnx for your reply,i agree with you that there were too many fly by.After i watched it a hundreds of times now i think the same about that,its getting boring.I'll try to improve in my new projects.
The bomb view was made with F6 view(you can only access that view after u have dropped the bombs) and the impact was made with ctrl+F11.
I hope the quality wasnt too bad cause i made this on a middle class PC.
I appreciate your crticts very much..thnx Happy
 
Posts: 37 | Registered: Fri November 22 2002Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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WOW! Eek That was actually VERY greaT! Very great length, action, and flying. I didnt think there were too many flybys, everything was just right, and i think u were the first person to incorporate taht new F4 view in a vid. Congrats! Razz I enojyed very much and dont have much to critisize plz make more!

BTW, you got pretty close together at the scene wen u were going under the bridge, and in the cockpit view his cockpit was like right next to yours. Did you have invinibility enbaled? Wink





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