The New Power

Rayman was running over to Ly's palace. "I have your new power Rayman," Ly said. "Yahoo!" said Rayman. Suddenly, Mr.Dark and Dark Rayman appeared out of nowhere and took Rayman's new power. "Thank you!" said Mr.Dark. So, Rayman set off to get his new power.

That's all for now, I'll write some more.

It's a good idea to have the whole chapter fully written before posting, just so you know.

Along the way, Rayman bumped into Globox. "Rayman I need to get to the doctors and fast!" said Globox. "Did you swallow Andre again?" asked Rayman. "It's Murphy" said Globox and they set off.

That's all for now, I'll write some more.

Did it really take you more then a month to write that?

About 30 seconds i'd bet.

Yeah, probably.

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Originally posted by Teensie.Queen:
have the whole chapter fully written before posting, just so you know.

so right

As Rayman and Globox were walking they saw a group of pirates. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH! The pirates are back" yelled Globox. The pirates saw them and started attacking. Rayman started throwing magic balls at them and punching them. Globox was helping by making a rainstorm. Soon all the pirates were wiped out.