Prologue:

For a over a decade, no injustice appeared in Rayman's world. Since Andre`s Fatal Strike upon us(forget about RRR and RRR2. They ain't part of Rayman anyway), nothing but peace. In fact, the whole of Rayman's world seems to never wonder of one day, evil would return. Especially Rayman and his friends: Globox, The two teensie bros(from Rayman M) and Moskito.

But Polokus, the great Protoon and the magician have yet to realise that very soon, something will try to perish our world. Something will cause enternal slavery, destruction and injustice forever. And Some of Rayman's oldest enemies will wait, hidden in the shadows.

And not even the Ray-Clan will together be as ready as they always seemed in the past to fight and work together. Some new allies will however join them eventually. Doomsday is comming, the fate of Rayman's world is in his hands, for that this world will be stolen, snacthed into darkness and....it's the end.....forever.....if nothing is done.



To be continued.....

This message has been edited. Last edited by: flyingrabids,

Good start. Very good start. I like it!

Only suggestion, make it longer, and don't mention the games casually. For example: Instead of saying "Since Rayman 3 Hoodlum Havoc" Say "Since the invasion of Andre" or "Since the Black Lum crisis" Or something along hose lines.

Anywho, I look forward to more.

I could have made then Prologue longer, but i didn`t really have much time.

Um, i`m in Japan now, but i should still have a few chances to continue this.

CHAPTER 1: The Warning

Rayman`s house was home of the biggest Family in this world. Rayman was Reading the Newspaper while Uglette was Preparing Breakfast. "Morning Ray" smiled Globox as he sat down. "Good night sleep"? Rayman replied."yes-i had a dream about you and me doing stuff" Globox said. "as Usual" sighed Rayman. The Baby Globoxes sat down too. Polaria, the globox whos dressed like a goth was no baby. He was the elder of the lot, but the same size as the other babies. He understood Rayman, Globox and Uglette extremely well. He was helping Uglette. The two Teensie Brothers and Moskito on the other hand, were getting plates and cutlery ready.

"Breakfast"! said Uglette Prouldly. "Thanks Uglette. I love Egg and Bacon with Baked Beans very much" sighed Rayman. He's been sighing alot Recently. Globox spoke up. "Beans beans beans, good for your heart, the more you eat the more you-". "Thats not funny Globoxy" said Polaria as he served the babies with breakfast. "Jeez, i know. Try to make up a Curry song buddy" said Rayman as he cheerfully ate his food. Andre lost his temper.

"Globox! Gimme a drink of Plum juice or i`ll suck up your intenstine like a piece of speghetti"! he moaned. Globox was also thirsty and was getting used to plum juice. He loved it more than Globox Cola. "Haha, i like your attitude Andre" laughed Moskito as he ate one of his red spiky fruit. Those spikes are fatal only not to him and the entire fruit was also his daily food.

"Here" said a teensie bro, handing over Globox a barral. He immediatly drank the liquid inside it. "All is forgiven" said Andre. "I am telling you, for the last time, to stop saying the same thing every time globox drinks plum juice and then YOU drink it!" frowned the other teensie bro.

Uglette, had since the beginning of her life, a curse. A rather friendly curse in fact. Sometimes, she saw into the future. Right now, she just had a vision for 5 miniutes. She looked as if she was staring into space. Polaria noticed that she hasn`t even started eating yet. "Uglette, uglette" he said. She Immediatly came out of her trance. "Y-yes"? she said. "....is that curse on you again"? said Polaria Curisously. "I think so". "What did you see?". "......the darkness coming. It appears and creates a shadow over our world. And....it`s....". "What,what is it?". "..........". "....". ".............gone...no where...".

Everyone turned to Uglette, after having heard all this. Rayman looked shocked and ran outside. Everyone followed. "What...what does that mean?" said Uglette Anxiously. "You, you don`t think....".

"It`s the end of our world!" he said, looking up in the sky, very shocked. The whole Family looked at eachother, puzzled and scared at the same time.


To be Continued.....

Chapter 2: Spread the Warning or die

"Is it Saturday"? asked Uglette. "Yes" replied Polaria. "Good, i like Saturdays" murmered Rayman. "Oi, don`t get all you-know-what. So what are we gonna do? Set Alert Fireworks"? blurted Andre. "We got to Warn everyone-quick"! paniced Rayman. "Lets split"!
"Wait-i have a betta idea" suggest Polaria.

Later Rayman and Moskito went to the Rainbow Creek Teensie Circle. Globox, Uglette, Polaria and the baby globoxes all went to the other Circle in the Minasaurus Plain. The teensie Bros, after having found murfy, went to the final circle.

"Teensie king! Guys! Uglette had another Vision in her curse-the end of our World is coming"! shouted Rayman as he bursted in. The king of the circle gasped. "Is this true? After all these years, evil has returned"? "Yes, and we must preform a worldwide contact with the spiral energy from the stones" said Moskito.

"I had another vision in my curse! I saw the disappearance of our world"! cried Uglette, waving her arms frantically. "For years, peace. Now MORE evil"?! startled the King of the circle. "Yes!" paniced Globox. All the Babies were running around and screaming. Polaria palmed his face. "We must hurry Globoxy" he murmered. "Help the teensie monks-you know how to activate the spiral energies"!

"Our World is in danger once again. Cool! I`m so excited"! cried Murfy. "................." said the king of the circle. "We must spread the warning that Uglette received in her curse" said a teensie bro, quickly. "And fast" said the other one.

Soon, every circle`s stones were glowing and creating a spiral. It started spreading in every direction. "ATTENTION PEOPLE-ANIMALS-EVERYONE" announced the three teensie king of the circles. "THANKS TO UGLETTE`S CURSE, SHE SAW INJUSTICE RETURN,STRIKE AGAIN. BUT PLEASE, WE MUST REMAIN CARM, DON`T PANIC. RAYMAN AND HIS FAMILY WILL TRY TO GET FURTHER DETAILS IN THE FURTHER FUTURE. FOR NOW, STAY IN YOUR HOMES. LOCK ALL DOORS, WINDOWS, ANYTHING. ANIMALS, BIRDS, FISH, SHARKS, WHALES, SERPANTS, MINASAURASES AND OTHERS, YOU MAY ALL JOING THE THE TEENSIE FARMERS, NURSES, THE THREE TEENSIE DOCTERS AND THE ORDINARY TEENSIE CITIZENS ONLY. END OF MESSAGE".

Everyone immediatly obeyed but were rather scared of the fact that Evil will try to Destroy this World Once again. Some animals evacuated themselves to safer places-either in someone else`s place or areas they would have to find themselves. The Sky became Dark, even though it was the morning. Not a Star Spirited in appearance. And the ground shook, just a bit.

To be Continued....

Love the roll Uglette plays.

Thankyou Mr Dark. But Unfortunatly,you`re the only Person who commented so far. At least i`ve got about 96 views.

Chapter 3: U.F.O Detected!

The shock-waving ground stopped. And for a long moment nothing happened. Rayman stared at the sky, waiting for something to happen. Suddenly, the Earthquake started again. But much worse this time...trees started collapsing, cracks appeared in the ground,Village houses were sshaking like mad. Soon Everyone had to get and without thinking, they started running and Panicing. "This is a Major Crisis come to life"! yelled Moskito as he dodged a falling tree branch. Meanwhile, the legless toads were more scared than anyone else. "What are we going to do darling"? cried Uglette as she held tight around Globox`s left arm. But he didn`t reply. Polaria tried to comfort her. "Mummy, i`m scared. I can`t take it anymore"! cried a Baby in fright. The other babies huddled together, very terrified and upset.

As the Earthquake continued, a rather explosive noise appeared. YEWOP! "What was that"? gasped a teensie monk. YEWOP! YEWOP! "I think something is causing explosions" said Rayman. YEWOP! YEWOP! YEWOP! People started seeing something, blury, hidden in the dark clouds. It was moving, towards the centre, where Polokus, the protoon and the magician lived. YEWOP! YEWOP!.....YEWOP!......YEWOP! "What the hell is that"?! startled Moskito. The clouds disappeared and whatever was casuing the explosions was reavealed. It was a Huge, Massive Red and Black Flying Saucer U.F.O. It had half-showing pods at the bottom with windows. At the bottom of each pod there was a green-glowing cannon. But they didn`t have fuses. Instead, they had pipes connected to the base of the U.F.O. Those canons were firing lasers in all directions, exploding anything it touches.

YEEEEEEEEEWOOOOOOOP!! One laser blasted the circle Rayman and Moskito was in, destroying the stones and the ground around them. Rayman, Moskito and the teensies of the circle including the king all went flying and fell in the sea. "AAAAAAAHHHHH"! screeched the king. "...NOOOOOOOOOOOO"! cried a monk. "The stones have been destroyed!". "What are we going to do without them"? sobbed another monk. "We need to get back to shore-quick! The waves are getting tough" warned Rayman.

In Space, lots of smaller versions of the big U.F.O were flying towards Rayman`s world.

Meanwhile..... "Cool! A U.F.O"! quoted Murfy. "Oh Shuddup" said the king of the circle. "...well, i going to find Rayman" added Murfy as he flew away. "I think we should get outta here too" said one of the teensie bros, slowly. "Yes, me too" replied the other. "Go ahead. We`ll be here" said the teensie king of the circle". "Okay, see ya. RUUUUUUUUN"! shouted both brothers as they formed into a wheel.

"Um......" said Polaria. "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH"! screamed the babies. "AHHHHHHHHHH"! yelled Globox and Uglette.

At the same instant, both teensie stone circles exploded. YEEEEEEEEEEEEWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPP!! "Ahhhhhhhhhh noooooooo"! the monks and two kings cried.

To be continued....

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Chapter 4: The Thing

Somewhere inside one of the pods on the big U.F.O, a......thing was looking out of a window. It looked like......some kind of.....black and red robo-pirate..thing with only one blue eye, a long arm with a silver hook at the right of the body and a small arm with a blaster gun on the left side of the body. It had three pipe-like legs. One between the left hand side and foward direction of it. Another between the right hand side and foward direction. The third one was at the back of it. It therefore resembled some kind of tri-pod. Each leg had a wickedly strong blade at the end. The body also had a hexagon shaped flap bewtween the two arms.

The window suddenly opened horizontally like a door and the thing flew out, using it`s legs as probeler blades. More windows opened and more things flew out, in a random direction. "Maxium Extermination"! one shouted. All the things started firing homing missiles from their small arm blasters. "We Destroy! We REVENGE"!! This world`s heroes all heard this. "What? Who are these monsters"? gasped Globox. "Globox, what are we going to do???" screamed Uglette. "Get lost and leave us alone"! snapped Polaria as a thing started slicing the ground with it`s leg blades nearby. "We do not listen to Globoxes"! it blasted. "Wha-what? How do you know us? WHO ARE YOU"?! gasped Polaria. "Our Identification doesn`t matter to you. This time, we will take our rightfall place and reduce the inhabitants into slavery once again"! the thing continued. "Wha....." gaped Polaria even more shocked. "Are you.." said Globox. One of the babies spoke up. "The-Ro-". "SILIENCE"! the thing blasted again as it`s hexagon flap suddenly opened and at the same split second a small net bursted out into a giagantic net and traped everyone including the teenie monks and the king of the circle. "Let us go"! struggled the king. But the net was as strong as anything and kept him trapped. Globox, Polaria and a baby however, somehow managed to escape without the thing noticing. They had no choice but to leave Uglette and the other babies and run away. They then triped on a large pebble and Globox collided into a strange portal while Polariab and the male baby globox rolled down the hill that led to the Minasuarus plain teensie stone circle. "I think we got sepertated from dad" said the baby as he stopped rolling. "Yes, but we have to keep going. Come on! I know somehwere we could go" replied Polaria. They ran towards the minasarus plain beach, running on the plank path to Bzzit`s boat. "You to take the boat. I have to find my brother Moskito in the Dream Forest. These...whatever they are caused too much trouble here. I-AHHHHHHHH"! Bzzit told Polaria and the baby. A thing appeared and shot the plank path, blasting Bzzit away. "Bzzit"! cried Polaria. "Just take the boat, i`ll be fiiiiiiiiine" yelled Bzzit as he flew away towards the Dream Forest`s Direction (wow, what a lucky animal you are Bzzit!). After a brief pause, Polaria and the baby jumpeds on the undamadged boat and turned on the new motor thats been put there. It was like other motor`s devoloped in Rayman`s world, quiet. Therefore no one could here it. The Boat immediatly started moving and it disappeared in the foggy mist that the things caused.

No one seemed to notice this but Rayman, Moskito, the king of the circle and the monks just made it to shore. It was a rather long swim. "W....we made it" panted Moskito. He fell in the sea too and couldn`t fly out because water often weakned his wings. "That was awful hard work" he said. "Yeah buts at least it`s good Exercise" replied a monk. "Good point" said the king as he stood up.

Later, they found a shelter and Rayman started eating a meatballs in heavy gravy can. Everyone else looked worried. "I`ve heard that a thing from the minasaurus plain teensie circle said that they will conquer and reduce us into slavery again. AGAIN? WHo are they if we fought them before. Who would do such a thing"? said the king. Rayman spoke up, slowly, looking into space. "Someone tried to do this before...long time ago. It can`t be......". "Y-you don`t think tha-that" gasped a monk. "The Robo-Pirates"?! cried the king.

To be continued...

BTW, how many Chapters will there be?

No idea. It just depends on how much writing i plan for the future.