well befor i start i want to clarify a couple things....


1. my english is bad so please let slip the english mistakes,

2.its not that good casue i cam up with it while takin a big **** alte nigh alst night... so it still needs to be perfected..

3. the chorus the messed up capitals where donne om perpous, like if a word is all capitals it needs to be like louder and fully puntiated if theirs only one capital letter then its a pit louder then the rest and so on and so forh...

but that is only for the chorus and not the verse.....


4. I realised this forums swear words are removed,, so the edit it swear words are the inapropriate word for poop./..


Chances where i wouldn’t hit 23
till mantel set me free,

aww ****,,,

Verse 1
man i use to hate gun runnas,
but now im a gun lova,
****, duck for cova
but i aint gonna
bail out just cause it gets hector
take cover and take nectar
****,, i feel like a high five
this improve my eye sight.
man i feel alright,
The suns all bright
alright, man i feel godlike,
but on the inside i feel like its not right.
but i still feal like im invincible,
like the hulk its incredible,,
its almost too good to be true
Join mantel and this could be you



Chorus x2

FIGHT the good FIght.. Yea RIGHT
THats what I THought., At FIrst SIGHT
Man.. me and ManTel, Where Real TIGHT..
i was Gone byt now Im BACK.. to set things RIGHT
_________________________________________________________

I got a flash of dead bodies
it was in read honey.....

****...
verse 2/


Nectar felt great, but for every high theirs a low,
nectar looked great, i wasn’t aware, its a show
return to mantel ****, i prefer to die slow,
they stronger ya i know,
i broke away from mantel it was a scandal
made me do things i couldn’t handle,
i was against who now im fighting for,
**** lighting which i adore,
was, removed so all i see are sunny days
it tricks me in some funny ways,
i walked in some bloody trails
wich i saw as muddy trails….
this don’t feel like a war its a military conflict
our goverment is as croocked as our convicts,
we freedom fighter who got this world terrified
Mantles lies we clarifies, the truth we verified..
join us, we reveal the truth
Mantel wants to kill our youth..


chorus x2

FIGHT the good FIght.. Yea RIGHT
THats what I THought., At FIrst SIGHT
Man.. me and ManTel, Where Real TIGHT..
i was Gone byt now Im BACK.. to set things RIGHT



i hate writting it down cause theirs some parts in my head where it speeds up and some parts where it slows down... i wouold rap it myself but i dont got a good mike and ive got one of the worse voices u have ever heard..



by the way share ur thoughts.. and u can be negative if you want but tell me waht u dont or do like about it,...

I respect your creativity. And I applaud incorporating HAZE into a rap.

And although it's decent, I can't help but chuckle at a HAZE rap. No offense. Keep up the good work.

quote:

Originally posted by nesv1:
I respect your creativity. And I applaud incorporating HAZE into a rap.

And although it's decent, I can't help but chuckle at a HAZE rap. No offense. Keep up the good work.

thnx... i know its lame but,,,i write raps t oexpress how i am fealling at a certain time, i dont calme to be good, or anyhting, just for fun most of the time its only one verse, and without a beat..... and befor i went for the big, poop i had just re read so many old things and had rread some new things about haze so i decided to rite a rap. o and it wasent really a big poop. i just say big for the sake of comedi;... caus hey without fun whats the point of living...

thnx for the reply.... cause i like to know what other people think...

Actually, that's pretty good.

Wow... at first i was like.. mm rap.. nah thanks..

but as i was reading through was really good i was even trying to rap the chorus out loud i think i got it :P

wow.

LOL, it took some serious balls to do that. Kudos to you guy. It wasn't half bad minus the grammar.

I'd like to hear it with a beat. I'm not a huge rap fan but...

You should create it so we can all hear!!!

quote:

Originally posted by Gypsy816:
I'd like to hear it with a beat. I'm not a huge rap fan but...

You should create it so we can all hear!!!

well unless u know, or are a beat maker, thats gonna be really hard, cause i did not spit it to a beat, and finding a beat thats gonna fit to that is gonna be chanllenging,, and i dont want to spend a whole day doing that...

quote:

Originally posted by nimer55:

quote:

Originally posted by Gypsy816:
I'd like to hear it with a beat. I'm not a huge rap fan but...

You should create it so we can all hear!!!

well unless u know, or are a beat maker, thats gonna be really hard, cause i did not spit it to a beat, and finding a beat thats gonna fit to that is gonna be chanllenging,, and i dont want to spend a whole day doing that...

Yeah true but you could always use Acid. A lot of people I know mix with Acid. Or Garage Band. But yeah good point... it would take a bit.

Iv got a good beat for it...

it sounds good whenever i say it..

quote:

Originally posted by Klixx:
Iv got a good beat for it...

it sounds good whenever i say it..

whats the name of the beat ??? can u send it??