BT!!! if u win, dont forget me and all that helpful advice ive given u over the years!!!! (oh yeah, and the fact that i have a 360 wink wink)

You know, I'm going to post my entry up on my homepage with the rest of my self-indulgent drivel

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It was a beautiful day in Acre..

As I was taking a walk in the market, the sweet fragrance of fresh fruits attracted me. So I stopped near a stand, to have a better look at those goods, when suddenly, two of the city guards started to push me around, accusing me of theft. Then some other guards joined them, and another one was stayin' behind them, watching us. I tried to explain to them that I did nothing wrong, but they didn't seem to understand, so they kept on pushin' me around...

I was callin' for help, but no one seemed to care.. no one interfered.. perhaps they were afraid of the guards.. yet, I saw a man coming right towards us.. he almost looked like a monk with those white clothes,.. and that hood on his head - I could barely see his face. By the way he was walking, he seemed very determined.. As he approached, I saw the bracers on his hands, and the sword.. so I knew he was some kind of warrior..
I don't think the guards noticed him, because they kept on pestering me...

The stranger was now right behind one of the guards, and quickly, he killed the guard with a sharp blade, sticking it into his throat. "A terrible way of dying", I said to myself.. he never knew what hit him.. The other guards immediately pulled off their swords and attacked him. With the skills and the accuracy of a master, the stranger almost sliced those bloody *******s, and in a few minutes, they were lifeless.

He put his sword back, and he came to me.. he didn't say anything...
As I was tryin' to find the right words in order to thank him, I was caught by his keen, ruthless sight.. I'll never forget those eyes...
I lowered my head, and I tried to think... Who was this man?.. A flawless warrior, fighting with an agility that no one has seen before.., a ruthless killer... It was him! Altaïr.. the perfect assassin..
I raised my head, but he was gone.. A white feather was carried by a light breeze.. I looked up - there he was... running on the rooftops like a mad man...
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a lack of inspiration.. my story sucks, so u can go ahead, laugh all u want..
oh, and sorry for my bad English..

i like that, red_girl.
only if he didn't speak how come she knows his name?

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Originally posted by altairego:
i like that, red_girl.
only if he didn't speak how come she knows his name?

she knew him.. he's famous..

red_girl, that was actually very good. I like assassinating the soldier that keeps guard first, and I keep assassinating until they bring out their swords.

i would not think he was famous by name. i figure the assassins would want to keep names secret among themselves.
but never mind me...

Wanting to keep something secret and succeeding are rarely the same thing. And since our boy Altaïr is supposedly the most prolific assassin in the entire region you can be sure that at least some of the locals would know him by sight and name

well, yea, you're right, all the guards in the kingdom know him by sight. can't even ride through.

That's partly the clothes and partly that he's acting suspicious by not slowing for them to get a proper look at him. Crusaders were notoriously paranoid

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Originally posted by BlairCullen02:
red_girl, that was actually very good. I like assassinating the soldier that keeps guard first, and I keep assassinating until they bring out their swords.

me too.. it's like they're standing there just waitin 4 u to kill them..

as to the girl in the story, she's heard of Altaïr, and when she saw that guy fightin' so good, she realised that it was him.. I don't know..

Maybe she's some secret agent spy womens?

nothing is as fast as a rumour

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Originally posted by Bobfish_Almight:
That's partly the clothes and partly that he's acting suspicious by not slowing for them to get a proper look at him. Crusaders were notoriously paranoid

they were also notoriously ideological. everything that did not wear a pot shaped helmet with limited vision capacity and suits of chainmail needed investigation.

we're really off topic here.
anyone got anymore stories?

will there be a assassins's creed on psp??? im just wondering because if the ds can handle the graphics im sure that psp will be able to handle the graphics too.. so what's the reason why they did not create a psp flatform for assassin's creed???

Well, the PSP isn't doing very well. They brought the game out on DS cos the DS is sailing smoothly.

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Originally posted by kulas88:
will there be a assassins's creed on psp??? im just wondering because if the ds can handle the graphics im sure that psp will be able to handle the graphics too.. so what's the reason why they did not create a psp flatform for assassin's creed???

The DS came nowhere near to handling the game dude. They had to recode it from the ground up, thus making a different game (a prequel) and not just a direct port

I watched as my superior was thrown through a doorway. Wooden structures collapsed, blocking off the doorway and my chance to rescue Altaïr. I was scared, but I had confidence in my brother to save us all.

Robert de Sable then shouted out "Men! To arms! Kill the assassins!" This is when I feared for the worst. It was 4:2, Robert not included. Nevertheless, I drew my sword and fought for my life, trying my best to kill the cursed Templars. A cry from my brother sent a chill down my spine, and I turned to see his left arm hanging loosely and spurting blood all over the floor. His attacker just laughed.

But the worst thing happened. I had let down my guard, and I only had my life to pay in return for my stupidity...