my gash.., starting to believe that this thread is becoming some refresh to Tavern's "ribaldry" and foolery. there were only few real threads here actually

i am wondering should i put one verse of my country's author i managed to translate weirdly actually, but one thing makes me not doing that - it's about in some ways foul life and i don't think that first verse posted here of Lithuanian one should be like so.. dirty

If I post something dirthy in Faorese, would you then post it?

you see not that very dirty, it's philosophical, but my translate has no rhyme maybe in Lithuanian i could write, i'll just see how about yours, Justice

Gvie me some moments and I'll create it

well i thought you'll have some from Faroesen poets

unless you are that poet

I'm the poet

Í einsemi eg sitit
Í tonkum teg riti

Eg sá teg ein dag
Tá ljómaði eitt lag
Um langar heitar natur
tá var eg ovurkatur
men nú er tað burtur

Eg vil hava teg
Føla teg
Taka teg

Í einsemi eg liggji
Tankar eg tiggji

Vit hildu saman
Í álvara og gaman
Sveitti og ást
Mundi okkum blást
men nú er tað burtur

Tú hevði meg
Føldi meg
Tók meg

Í einsemi eg angri
Eg sá teg í svangri

Men tú tók hann
Eg lýstur í bann
Eg sá tykkum saman
Í álvara og gaman
men nú er tað burtur

Hann fekk teg
Føldi teg
Tók teg

Í einsemi eg gangi
Síggji brátt, ein tangi

Hann sum ein hestur
Har var eingin prestur
Títtari, títtari og títtari
Alt meðan eg varð bíttari
tó iki longur

Tú hevði hann
Føldi hann
Tók hann

Í einsemi eg drap hann
Eingin lýsir meg í bann

Stálið í hann rendi
Tú sá alt, tað hendi
Angist. Blóð og sveitti
Okkurt á meg heitti
tó ikki longur


Eg fekk teg, aftur
Føldi teg, aftur
Tók teg, aftur

Í einsemi teg beðri
Í kropp tín skerði

Hatur í eyðum lýsti
Alt meðan tú nýsti
Tig nú, eg rópti
Seinastu fer meg nøkti

Tú fekk blaðið
Føldi blaðið
Tók blaðið

Í einsemi teg ripi
Út av einum skipi

Bylgjur bróta
Hamar rópa
Í hav eg søkki
Ljósi sløkkji

Saman


translation comming soon.

i know only one thing..
nagging Dergosesis to write it
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well, i think i'm going to put in Lithuanian also

I?m sitting alone
Carving you in stone

I saw you one day
A song about a lay
About long hot nights
I felt like thousand knights
But now it is gone

I want you
Feel you
Take you

Alone I sleep
You I can?t keep

We were together
In good and bad weather
Swaet and sex
They were our rex
But now it is gone

You had me
Felt me
Took me

Alone I regrett
Another life you?ll get

But you took him
I were too dim
Saw you together
In good and bad weather
But now it is gone

He got you
He felt you
He took you

Alone I walk
Hear the ocean talk

He like a horse you took
No priest was there to look
Faster, faster yes fast
All the while I wanted Bast

You had him
Felt him
Took him

Alone I killed him
No one called me dim

The steel in him I trust
You saw, through lust
Fear, blood and sweat
Something yelled get

I got you, again
I feelt you, again
I took you, again

Alone I carry your body
Bathered and bloody

Hate in yor eyes lied
Each time I took you, you died
Shut up, I yelled
Last time you frelled

You got the knife
Felt the knife
Took the knife

Alone I you rip
Away from the ship

Waves smash
Stones lash
In the ocean I sink
Light?s out, I think

Together

well, i quite liked it, it reminds me of some epic verse where a storyline exists, but you can see it without wonders, when you say "dirty" Justice thinks of sex at once. And some heroic fight of course.
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well, i've got pissed myself off with translation of Lithuanian verse, so i'll put here now only the original of sonnet; but this, unfortunately, does no sense to you
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without title. in chronological scale it was marked 20 from the "Autumn sonnets" from cycle "Years"

A? esu girtuoklis, palaid?nas,
Be garb?s ir s??in?s ?mogus.
?irdyje ?lind?s velnias t?no:
Jo klausau kaip vergas paklusnus.

Ir vergaudamas da?nai svajoju
Apie ?irdis tyras ir ?ventas.
A? nevertas pulti jums po koj?
Ir nuplauti a?arom rankas.

Tos svajon?s, blizgan?ios kaip sniegas
Manyje kaskart skais?iau pra?ysta,
O pro ?al? met? metai b?ga,

Kaupdami ?irdy d?mes, menkyst?, -
Vaik?tau po smukles, kur kek??s zuja,
Ir skaitau gyvenimus ?vent?j?.

V.M

Thanks

I don't even know how to pronounce the letters but it looks like it rhymes.

quote:

Originally posted by Justice:


I don't even know how to pronounce the letters but it looks like it rhymes.

as i don't know how to spell yours. yep it rhymes, but it's not the most important thing in a verse i think, Justice

In DM Whiners
Constantly moan and complain
Pointlessly boring

quote:

Originally posted by tadaeusas:


as i don't know how to spell yours. yep it rhymes, but it's not the most important thing in a verse i think, Justice

But that was the only thing I could see

indeed , but sometimes it's hard to see even that, i've noticed how much do you pay attention for rhyming (take a look to your epic verse again) and it seems what rhyme to you is very important, maybe too much but i don't say anything, i just love when something sounds well

I just like the old days style
Ads more soul and is more catchy I think. And I also sarted with poems to improove my writing more, and rhymes is the most challenging kind of poems

hey i think it's a good start for ya, Justice, it really rhymed
you see, the modern style verse, which sometimes has it mixed up or hasn't at all is quite good also, because the author can more easily to express himself - sometimes rhyme puts you in some frames.
i also have some wrritten, but only in Lithuanian though

Thanks those pretty much are my first poems
The modern ones are probably easier yes, but I like restrictions as long as the restrictiopns aren't too strict that is.- I'm pretty pissed by the restricitons in Danish, so I just write the stuff and turn it in, with the result that I only get a bit above average in Faroese I finally managed to get AA+ or what I should call it 13 here, about two 13s are given average each year in each of the linguistic subjects and I'm still bloody happy about it

Uhm, yes, poems, right

Wish I could understand Lithuanian, perhaps you could force Kyra back and then force her to translate it for you

heh.. ain't all Faroesen so poetish then?

well, about moderns, yep it may be easier to write it, but it is not inferior to older style ones. it's a new epoch, Justice, have to deal with it

about translation, i could somehow do it, but that would lose its majesty and rhyme of course you see, it's very hard to make something from Lithuanian language, if you didn't know - this language is if i'm not wrong - third from the most difficult to learn languages that are alive , the most difficult are i think Japanesen and Chinesen "hieroglyphs" but i'm not sure about it
but it's possible.. to try.. well then, wouldn't be that bad for me to learn Faroesen

Not really me and a friend like to make poems, else... Some think it's fine, others think we are mad

Personally I prefeer the old ones, but that's just me

Heh, guess I'll jsut have to live without Lithuanian poems then...

lol would be fun if you started talking Faorese and I Lithuanian

heh.. better take a look to the BTOG's personal message on msn
well, i'm a wee bit confused what i like more
awww, Justice, *gives a book of Lithuanian language element to Justice*

indeed, like we say "a life with a different corner/angle of view"