Very nice! I like it!

It's kinda dark on my laptop screen, but that's mainly because it isn't plugged into AC power, so it isn't at its brightest.

I brightened it and added some messy highlights, so it's definitely better now.



Still have a lot of work ahead of me, but I like how it is coming out so far. I can't wait to get the comic started.

Thanks for the input, AJ.

What are the ovals on her head?

Also, I like the sense of light coming from behind.

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What are the ovals on her head?

She`s a "frog-woman", you know?
Nah, those are (sun-)glases I think.

Girl, I really love your work!
You are spending a lot of time doing this, right?
I wonder how long you need to finish a whole comic?
Again: GREAT WORK!

Thanks, Sam.

Those ovals are her goggles. I wanted to give her night vision, but I didn't want to make them look too much like Fisher's, because I'm trying to make a spy comic, but I do not want it to be too similar to SC, then I'd be called a rip off.

But yeah, this is taking a lot of time, and a comic will definitely take me a loooooong time to do as well. Which is why I'm going to start this off as a web comic. Maybe get about 8-10 base pages done, upload them, and release a new page every week until it's completed, then I will sell it as a graphic novel. If enough people like it, that is.

So that's the plan now, I hope I can get enough time to get more work done, I've got a full time job, so it really gets in the way. :/

So those dots are the light or something? Kind of looks like her spidey sense. lol

LOL! omg that made me lol.

Those dots will be erased later, they're part of my skin color palette. I need to use those hues when shading, so I keep them there, that way I'll have the exact hue I need and I won't get confused.

Another update:



Still got a lot more to do, I wish I didn't have to work so much. :/

Ok, done.




Wallpaper

Deviantart

That looks amazing.

Sarai, the wife of Abraham? What a lucky bastard.

Yeah, that's where I got the name. You're the only one to have known that so far, very impressive.

Thanks for the comments, that's very encouraging.

The pointy, 1 pixel highlights on her breasts are IMO out of place and look like weird nipples. Besides that it looks great.

I actually borrowed some of my highlighting techniques from animes. Even though this doesn't really look like an anime drawing. Often times they add little dots of highlight on breasts, cheeks, knees, and other random places here and there. I tried it out to see what it would look like, and I like it personally, but I'll have to see what it looks like without it as well, I'm open minded.

Thanks for the input.

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Yeah, that's where I got the name. You're the only one to have known that so far, very impressive.

Thanks for the comments, that's very encouraging.

Yeah, that's sad considering I'm not even Christian.

How long have you been developing her/this project?

I came up with the story idea about 2-3 weeks ago and started this drawing not long after. Too me longer than I had hoped since I had to work so much, I didn't have a lot of time to get to it.

But yesterday I got the flu, so I was able to finish it between naps.

I can tell you spent time on it. The proportions are defined and not like a sketch you come up with cold and in 10 minutes.

Another character for my comic. Still uber beta:



More info about him later.

Nice pic, but where is his hand going??

He's going to be holding a rifle, but for now, it's just thin air. Guna are very difficult for me to draw, so I'm saving that for last.

Thanks for the feedback, Sam.

His eyes...they're staring into the depths of my soul. They're also fantastically drawn.

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