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KathieBills
12-21-2010, 01:27 PM
I got bored one day so i decided to make a quick short story. The end isn't really the end I might post a second part depending on what you guys think of it.


Since the fall of the Borgia there has been rumors of a group of assassins murding any guards they see. I have not witnesed this my self, but I have seen some of Roma's citizens being forced to clean the mess for nothing. I have nearly been forced to scrub the blood off the foot path but just as they saw me I fled the scene. I fear to go back around the area for the gaurd might see me, but I have too. My sister, Bello, works for the Brothel and she is not well. Daily, I have been going to the local doctor and getting her medeicine but it does not seem to be working. Sevral of the other courtesan have been ill also and I may have figured out who poisend them. But even if im right I can not do anything. My name is Sentimentale Gioioso and I make my money by working on a farm. I don't get paid much neither does my sister but we are still alive and can eat a decent meal so im not going to complain.

As I walk around the corner, I stop to look for any gaurds, to my relief, I don't see any so I continue to walk over to the docotor. The broken down tailor store on the way to the docotor's is getting renverated. There is a man talking to the old owner. I can tell because I used to visit the store regularly for Bello, to get her a new gown with the money she gave me. The man is wearing a grey gown, with a red hod and a red cape. He has greeves on along with armour on both wrists, his shoulders and his chest.There was wolf fur around his chest over part of his armour and a statue of an eagle on his right shoulder. He also has a pouch made out of leather with more leather draping down to his knee's with an iron button at the end to keep them down. There is a design, on his waist, which looks like the shape which is painted on old Borgia towers run by the rumored brotherhood. I could not see his face though because it was masked by the shadow of the hood.

http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs300.ash2/58010_128633643863019_100001491521350_176766_38218 50_a.jpg


Luckily there were no guards on the way back, but as I got home the door was slightly open. I didn't want to go in and I was right. I peak through the slight crack and there was the same man who was talking to the old owner of the tailor store. He looked to be making Bello drink something. It was not the man who I thought had poisoned her before, but I was not going to risk it. I grab the dagger I carry in my boot and slide through the gap. He hasn't noticed me, so I grab the dagger with both hands and swing, aiming for his neck.

KathieBills
12-21-2010, 01:27 PM
I got bored one day so i decided to make a quick short story. The end isn't really the end I might post a second part depending on what you guys think of it.


Since the fall of the Borgia there has been rumors of a group of assassins murding any guards they see. I have not witnesed this my self, but I have seen some of Roma's citizens being forced to clean the mess for nothing. I have nearly been forced to scrub the blood off the foot path but just as they saw me I fled the scene. I fear to go back around the area for the gaurd might see me, but I have too. My sister, Bello, works for the Brothel and she is not well. Daily, I have been going to the local doctor and getting her medeicine but it does not seem to be working. Sevral of the other courtesan have been ill also and I may have figured out who poisend them. But even if im right I can not do anything. My name is Sentimentale Gioioso and I make my money by working on a farm. I don't get paid much neither does my sister but we are still alive and can eat a decent meal so im not going to complain.

As I walk around the corner, I stop to look for any gaurds, to my relief, I don't see any so I continue to walk over to the docotor. The broken down tailor store on the way to the docotor's is getting renverated. There is a man talking to the old owner. I can tell because I used to visit the store regularly for Bello, to get her a new gown with the money she gave me. The man is wearing a grey gown, with a red hod and a red cape. He has greeves on along with armour on both wrists, his shoulders and his chest.There was wolf fur around his chest over part of his armour and a statue of an eagle on his right shoulder. He also has a pouch made out of leather with more leather draping down to his knee's with an iron button at the end to keep them down. There is a design, on his waist, which looks like the shape which is painted on old Borgia towers run by the rumored brotherhood. I could not see his face though because it was masked by the shadow of the hood.

http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs300.ash2/58010_128633643863019_100001491521350_176766_38218 50_a.jpg


Luckily there were no guards on the way back, but as I got home the door was slightly open. I didn't want to go in and I was right. I peak through the slight crack and there was the same man who was talking to the old owner of the tailor store. He looked to be making Bello drink something. It was not the man who I thought had poisoned her before, but I was not going to risk it. I grab the dagger I carry in my boot and slide through the gap. He hasn't noticed me, so I grab the dagger with both hands and swing, aiming for his neck.

LordWolv
12-21-2010, 01:35 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-surprised.gif
What happens next? That's a great story so far. I can't wait to see the next part! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/clap.gif

ZCherub
12-21-2010, 01:46 PM
Cliff notes: Poor farmer w/ a ***** sister has an unreasonable fear of random constabularies. Sees Ezio talking to a tailor for no reason, then runs home to find Ezio trying to date rape his AIDS infested ***** sister. He pulls a knife, obviously not knowing that Ezio will cut him 7 new @$$holes in his sleep just for the fun of it. ...and they all lived happily ever after.

LordWolv
12-21-2010, 02:11 PM
You, ZCherub, just made me LOL in the most epic way I've done for months.

glenneey
12-21-2010, 02:17 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Isaac500:
You, ZCherub, just made me LOL in the most epic way I've done for months. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
Don't mind this pic, just the text in it:

Totally awesome story!
make more!!!http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

<span class="ev_code_RED">Please don't use that Language in pictures either.</span>

magesupermaster
12-21-2010, 02:31 PM
I might still be under the effects of a post history test, but I can't find the awesome in the story.

The story is nice and well thought though.

And glenneey, I'm going to dream about this picture tonight! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

F4H bandicoot
12-21-2010, 02:45 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by magesupermaster:
I might still be under the effects of a post history test, but I can't find the awesome in the story.

The story is nice and well thought though.

And glenneey, I'm going to dream about this picture tonight! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
mage, what was your test about? you seem alterd by it.
nice story, good plot line, cant wait for the end.

ZCherub
12-21-2010, 03:20 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Isaac500:
You, ZCherub, just made me LOL in the most epic way I've done for months. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Glad I could help.

magesupermaster
12-21-2010, 03:27 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by bandicoot17:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by magesupermaster:
I might still be under the effects of a post history test, but I can't find the awesome in the story.

The story is nice and well thought though.

And glenneey, I'm going to dream about this picture tonight! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
mage, what was your test about? you seem alterd by it.
nice story, good plot line, cant wait for the end. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

The test was about Herzl, the Zionist Organization and The First Zionist Congress.

Marco_red
12-27-2010, 02:48 PM
what happens next?

I want more http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/11.gif

SlimeDynamiteD
12-27-2010, 02:54 PM
Great story, love it.
But... Sentimentale? You couldn't find a better name? XD