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Chel Nak Tauri
06-29-2004, 10:18 PM
I wrote a Halo fanfic. Everyone who's seen it so far likes it. I have two parts so far. And please don't correct any grammer problems. FO gives me enough of that, and they're little things like confusing it's and its.

It's about an elite who changes sides to fight with the humans. Read the story before going off on a tangent of Covenant loyalty and ****. My explanation is there. I managed to get the character through every event of Halo and have him get off alive without conflicting with the actual events of Halo from Master Chief's perspective. And for those who've read the books, please inform me of any inconsistencies with the story I don't know of.

The story is here:
http://s8.invisionfree.com/TheTwoBetrayals/index.php?showtopic=13&st=0

But please leave comments here:
http://twobetrayals.proboards20.com/index.cgi?board=bboard&action=display&num=1088523524
Because I prolly won't be coming back here to check for comments.

Yep I'm leaving. Didn't wanna start a thread just to say that so I just put it in this one.
This place is too dull. I have more posts in 2 weeks on one of the thousands of Halo sites than I've had since I took up this username. This site is pitiful. As I said, I won't be back here to look at comments, so don't try to convince me to stay. But enough with the leaving part.

Oh, and anyone who wants to see, in HTML format, why SC9 got banned, I should still have a perfect copy of 4 or 5 pages of spam. Just ask me and I'll pass out the pages.

Anyone who knows my MSN, don't give it out, I have too many conversations going on at once now anyways, I don't need to be convinced to stay by 30 people. I'll probably just block people anyways.

Thank you and farewell.

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Chel Nak Tauri
06-29-2004, 10:18 PM
I wrote a Halo fanfic. Everyone who's seen it so far likes it. I have two parts so far. And please don't correct any grammer problems. FO gives me enough of that, and they're little things like confusing it's and its.

It's about an elite who changes sides to fight with the humans. Read the story before going off on a tangent of Covenant loyalty and ****. My explanation is there. I managed to get the character through every event of Halo and have him get off alive without conflicting with the actual events of Halo from Master Chief's perspective. And for those who've read the books, please inform me of any inconsistencies with the story I don't know of.

The story is here:
http://s8.invisionfree.com/TheTwoBetrayals/index.php?showtopic=13&st=0

But please leave comments here:
http://twobetrayals.proboards20.com/index.cgi?board=bboard&action=display&num=1088523524
Because I prolly won't be coming back here to check for comments.

Yep I'm leaving. Didn't wanna start a thread just to say that so I just put it in this one.
This place is too dull. I have more posts in 2 weeks on one of the thousands of Halo sites than I've had since I took up this username. This site is pitiful. As I said, I won't be back here to look at comments, so don't try to convince me to stay. But enough with the leaving part.

Oh, and anyone who wants to see, in HTML format, why SC9 got banned, I should still have a perfect copy of 4 or 5 pages of spam. Just ask me and I'll pass out the pages.

Anyone who knows my MSN, don't give it out, I have too many conversations going on at once now anyways, I don't need to be convinced to stay by 30 people. I'll probably just block people anyways.

Thank you and farewell.

http://67.18.37.16/377/125/upload/p1136708.jpg
http://67.18.37.15/1218/52/pip/EvoArmyGeneral.gif
General of the Evo Army | PT me to join | Look for blue rank symbols

XyZspineZyX
06-29-2004, 10:55 PM
Dude, Halo pwnXX0rz! http://ubbxforums.ubi.com/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Chel Nak Tauri
06-29-2004, 10:59 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Dude, Halo pwnXX0rz! http://ubbxforums.ubi.com/infopop/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

That pretty much encompasses both halves of the reason I'm leaving.

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BloodMoneyMaker
06-29-2004, 11:03 PM
LOL Tau'ri, no one seems to care. I see u like everyday, so i don't care either.

"If everyone could hear what people are really thinking, there would be a lot more murders. http://img15.photobucket.com/albums/v46/jackslate13/Affiliation_Logo.jpg What am i doing here?

XyZspineZyX
06-30-2004, 08:39 AM
So I guess you think that was funny what Sc9 did. Well I'll tell you and everyone exactly what he did. He spammed almost the entire board and other boards as well. NOT COOL

It kinda seems to me Chel Nak Tauri that you are advocating him doing it. If you are saving the HTML of that incident don't you think. It's no big secret why he was banned, so don't try this black ops approach to take up for him
Finally, if you think the boards are dull it is probably, in the words of Skulls-Hawk, Lack of participation on your part.
I've enjoyed a lot of the topics you have started but not going to beg you to stay. I tell ya what since you are wanting to post a lot about Halo now go to Halo.Bungie.Org Forum (http://carnage.bungie.org/haloforum/halo.forum.pl)
Post here all you want to about Halo and see how they treat people,. If you already post here you must know what I'm talking about. If you can't take my word for it ask S7N he will tell ya.
Also submit your fanfic to this site also Louis Wu will put it on this site if you would like.

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06-30-2004, 10:53 AM
yeah km's right, its **** over there, you'll say one thing and it might even be something small ike "lol" and they'll flame ya for it!

and yeah, if you wanna get good feedback on your Halo fan fic submit it at there

the posters may be horrible, but the guys who read the fan fic and give feedback are generally a cool bunch

i've had so much good feedback from them its made me write more

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XyZspineZyX
06-30-2004, 07:40 PM
S7N where is my chaper 23? lol
an elete on the human side this I gotta see.

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