Chel Nak Tauri
06-29-2004, 09:18 PM
I wrote a Halo fanfic. Everyone who's seen it so far likes it. I have two parts so far. And please don't correct any grammer problems. FO gives me enough of that, and they're little things like confusing it's and its.
It's about an elite who changes sides to fight with the humans. Read the story before going off on a tangent of Covenant loyalty and ****. My explanation is there. I managed to get the character through every event of Halo and have him get off alive without conflicting with the actual events of Halo from Master Chief's perspective. And for those who've read the books, please inform me of any inconsistencies with the story I don't know of.
The story is here:
http://s8.invisionfree.com/TheTwoBetrayals/index.php?showtopic=13&st=0
But please leave comments here:
http://twobetrayals.proboards20.com/index.cgi?board=bboard&action=display&num=1088523524
Because I prolly won't be coming back here to check for comments.
Yep I'm leaving. Didn't wanna start a thread just to say that so I just put it in this one.
This place is too dull. I have more posts in 2 weeks on one of the thousands of Halo sites than I've had since I took up this username. This site is pitiful. As I said, I won't be back here to look at comments, so don't try to convince me to stay. But enough with the leaving part.
Oh, and anyone who wants to see, in HTML format, why SC9 got banned, I should still have a perfect copy of 4 or 5 pages of spam. Just ask me and I'll pass out the pages.
Anyone who knows my MSN, don't give it out, I have too many conversations going on at once now anyways, I don't need to be convinced to stay by 30 people. I'll probably just block people anyways.
Thank you and farewell.
http://67.18.37.16/377/125/upload/p1136708.jpg
http://67.18.37.15/1218/52/pip/EvoArmyGeneral.gif
General of the Evo Army | PT me to join | Look for blue rank symbols
It's about an elite who changes sides to fight with the humans. Read the story before going off on a tangent of Covenant loyalty and ****. My explanation is there. I managed to get the character through every event of Halo and have him get off alive without conflicting with the actual events of Halo from Master Chief's perspective. And for those who've read the books, please inform me of any inconsistencies with the story I don't know of.
The story is here:
http://s8.invisionfree.com/TheTwoBetrayals/index.php?showtopic=13&st=0
But please leave comments here:
http://twobetrayals.proboards20.com/index.cgi?board=bboard&action=display&num=1088523524
Because I prolly won't be coming back here to check for comments.
Yep I'm leaving. Didn't wanna start a thread just to say that so I just put it in this one.
This place is too dull. I have more posts in 2 weeks on one of the thousands of Halo sites than I've had since I took up this username. This site is pitiful. As I said, I won't be back here to look at comments, so don't try to convince me to stay. But enough with the leaving part.
Oh, and anyone who wants to see, in HTML format, why SC9 got banned, I should still have a perfect copy of 4 or 5 pages of spam. Just ask me and I'll pass out the pages.
Anyone who knows my MSN, don't give it out, I have too many conversations going on at once now anyways, I don't need to be convinced to stay by 30 people. I'll probably just block people anyways.
Thank you and farewell.
http://67.18.37.16/377/125/upload/p1136708.jpg
http://67.18.37.15/1218/52/pip/EvoArmyGeneral.gif
General of the Evo Army | PT me to join | Look for blue rank symbols